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ctowen
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0 posted 2002-09-19 08:50 PM


Tender
  thee heart
   before thy storm
    as thy light glows
     and thee air is warm

         ... ((moonshadows)) ...


  Hinder
   with mind
    behind lost cloud
     for night soon flows
      and the sun has bowed

             ... ((moonshadows)) ...


   Render
    our soul
     to empty space
      upon life's tolls
       such darkness we face ...

                       ... ((moonshadows))

Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure.   -   C. Belville 02

© Copyright 2002 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
Miah
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1 posted 2002-09-19 09:21 PM


Very good , I enjoyed this.  
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2 posted 2002-09-19 10:15 PM


CTOwen~
This is creatively clever ... very, very good~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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the_loner_23
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3 posted 2002-09-19 10:16 PM


Awesome, I defiently enjoyed this.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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4 posted 2002-09-19 11:04 PM




(smiles) Oh Craig, this is wonderful, I love it, your wonderful words always make me smile! (big hugggsssss) This is a reflection of delight, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Bill Charles
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5 posted 2002-09-20 12:30 PM


ctowen - yes, the moon is in all it's splendor tonight. Excellent write...

BC

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6 posted 2002-09-20 12:56 PM


I see that moonshadows have captured your poet's heart again. Smiling, in peace.
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7 posted 2002-09-20 04:24 PM


ctowen,
I love how you made the air whisper in this poem.

Mike

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8 posted 2002-09-20 07:54 PM


Very Beautiful....enjoyed.

DeaDiAmore

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9 posted 2002-09-20 09:14 PM


Very smartly written - enjoyed. Chris

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10 posted 2002-09-20 09:45 PM


Craig, this is well done, and wonderful. Moonshadows are the best kind.
Sandra

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11 posted 2002-09-21 10:07 PM


its a marvelous night for a MOON DANCE''


Love the New pic too.....


this just has that magic to it, that all your words seem to have....I felt like I was floating.......


Lauren~

I need some distraction
...oh beautiful release
Memories seep from my veins

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12 posted 2002-09-22 10:32 AM


woah it somehow reminded me of shakepear
I enjoyed it was kinda magical

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

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13 posted 2002-09-22 10:44 AM


Very good Craig....well crafted poem...
and the words fit the feel, most
certainly...

Suetang
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14 posted 2002-09-22 06:40 PM


Hello Craig

The title reminded me of the Cat Steven's song of the same name and I loved the words you wrote.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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