Open Poetry #22 |
Moonshadows |
ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Tender thee heart before thy storm as thy light glows and thee air is warm ... ((moonshadows)) ... Hinder with mind behind lost cloud for night soon flows and the sun has bowed ... ((moonshadows)) ... Render our soul to empty space upon life's tolls such darkness we face ... ... ((moonshadows)) Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure. - C. Belville 02 |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
Very good , I enjoyed this. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CTOwen~ This is creatively clever ... very, very good~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome, I defiently enjoyed this. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Craig, this is wonderful, I love it, your wonderful words always make me smile! (big hugggsssss) This is a reflection of delight, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ctowen - yes, the moon is in all it's splendor tonight. Excellent write... BC |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I see that moonshadows have captured your poet's heart again. Smiling, in peace. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
ctowen, I love how you made the air whisper in this poem. Mike |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Very Beautiful....enjoyed. DeaDiAmore |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very smartly written - enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Craig, this is well done, and wonderful. Moonshadows are the best kind. Sandra |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
its a marvelous night for a MOON DANCE'' Love the New pic too..... this just has that magic to it, that all your words seem to have....I felt like I was floating....... Lauren~ I need some distraction |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
woah it somehow reminded me of shakepear I enjoyed it was kinda magical If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very good Craig....well crafted poem... and the words fit the feel, most certainly... |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Craig The title reminded me of the Cat Steven's song of the same name and I loved the words you wrote. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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