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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2002-09-22 12:14 PM





© Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
brian madden
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1 posted 2002-09-22 12:25 PM


Karilea, now you are showing off.. not only are you writing beautiful poetry but you are presenting it with such finesse.
lol I kid,
wonderful write.

Too early for the rainbow, too early for the dove These are the final days, this is the darkness, this is the flood
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2 posted 2002-09-22 01:15 PM


Karilea - oh, now, see what you have done with this beauty? I will be walking around the rest of the day with my head "in the clouds." hugs, Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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3 posted 2002-09-22 02:16 PM


Karilea....so beautiful...
You have perfected the words with picture.
Well done.
~Hugs YOU~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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4 posted 2002-09-22 02:18 PM


Expressed with great depth and insight.
ThisDiamond

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5 posted 2002-09-22 02:29 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, it must be the most magical feeling of all to be kissed and I still yearn for my first, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Ems
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6 posted 2002-09-22 02:31 PM


I agree with the others, the picture really enhances the words and makes you think a lot more about what you are saying. You use it well. The words you choose are perfect, really hit you hard.

Ems
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Denise
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7 posted 2002-09-22 06:29 PM


Beautiful!
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8 posted 2002-09-23 06:11 PM


Karilea,
Bring on
the cleanse of
rain.

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9 posted 2002-09-23 10:03 PM


I'm thirsty for more of this kind of thunderous electricity! tehe

EA

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