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In the Listen of Forever
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In the Listen of Forever |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
And here I linger Lost in the thoughts of moist sweet pine Spirits of the eve to call me back...Back Into the twilight walk on moonlight carpet steps Over and Over... And here I linger Standing on the golden shores Breathing in the swells of frothy surf come forth Again and Again... And here I linger Barefoot in the dew drops cool beneath my feet Lost and not forsaken For I call your name into the loving arms of remember Over and Over... Copyright Kkh 9/19/02 [This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (09-19-2002 10:49 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is a awesome poem Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Romance combined with lovely, haunting imagery... Very beautifully penned, Kathy  ~ chipmunk hugsLyra |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Kathy, keep writing this style of free verse. It wears very well on you.... Very well indeed....like silk.... Awesome piece of yearning passion... Nice flurb... Gridley.. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"And here I linger"...very effective how you repeated this throughout the poem..."over and over" A very nice piece of writing! ~ smiles across the miles ~ Linda |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
instantly, TD, i was standing on a shore, mesmerized by the slapping rhythm over and over until i remembered what was lost...but that's the point of the poem isn't it? *s* jeff |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"And here I linger Barefoot in the dew drops cool beneath my feet Lost and not forsaken For I call your name into the loving arms of remember Over and Over...  (big hugggsssssss) Oh Kathleen, such echos of deph and yearning fill your words, sweet friend, and may the seagull cry always respond with a dolphin weep of love and may love always listen to your golden heart forever, this is excellent, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Beautiful poem! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Thank you everyone. ThisDiamond |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
Oh yes..I do love your writing. and this.. "My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your poetry is hauntingly beautiful, it seems to hang on the crest while it continues to flow so freely. (I've been meaning to tell you that) I enjoyed this very much~~~~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Barefoot in the dew drops cool beneath my feet" My feet felt the dampness, and the desire to linger overcame my spirit, and my eyes moistened from sweet pine scented memories... Your imagery inspired me.  |
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Gabriel Frost Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 216Between midnight thoughts |
This is really great.That's all i can say.Terrific. |
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Gabriel Frost Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 216Between midnight thoughts |
This is really great.That's all i can say.Terrific. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Barefoot in the dew drops cool beneath my feet Lost and not forsaken For I call your name into the loving arms of remember Over and Over... beautiful and exquisite writing TD. Well done. If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ThisDiamond~ The title pulled me in ... (I love great titles) and the poem flow kept me~ Very nicely written~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
"And here I linger" lovely...just lovely |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful...absolutely beautiful! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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