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Krishankins
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0 posted 2002-09-22 06:42 AM



Smooth as a secret chasing silence
Powdered the nights empty streets
Dissolved in a world confettied in greed
I heard a homeless man weep

© Copyright 2002 Kristopher Hankins - All Rights Reserved
Neeraja
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1 posted 2002-09-22 08:27 AM


A strong touching poem Krish!

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2 posted 2002-09-22 09:14 AM


Kris~
This is ever so touching~

You definitely hit your goal of fitting 'as much emotion' as you could in a few lines~

Most effectively felt~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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3 posted 2002-09-22 09:24 AM



Sometimes I feel you have
wrapped a lifetime
in silk threads...

you do these so very well!

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4 posted 2002-09-22 09:34 AM


Kris,
Another strong thought woven, from but a few threads.

I like the way you're able to do this.

~wranx

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".      

~wranx~

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5 posted 2002-09-22 09:45 AM


its talent to be able to say what you feel in such few words. Enjoyed

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6 posted 2002-09-22 03:48 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Kristopher, this is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to all these homeless and those who need love and I send my prayers and heart out to them all though they need so much more! (sigh) This is compassionately touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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7 posted 2002-09-22 03:52 PM


Love the way you do this Kris!
Absolutely excellent!
~Hugs~

*Love that star under your name*

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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8 posted 2002-09-22 04:28 PM


Absolutely excellent!
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9 posted 2002-09-22 08:38 PM


You most definately have a way with words, so few so little but painted so well on the canvas of my mind!

Consider yourself fuzzed

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