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Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

0 posted 2002-09-22 06:42 AM

Smooth as a secret chasing silence
Powdered the nights empty streets
Dissolved in a world confettied in greed
I heard a homeless man weep

Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

1 posted 2002-09-22 08:27 AM

A strong touching poem Krish!

Neeraja

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2002-09-22 09:14 AM

Kris~
This is ever so touching~

You definitely hit your goal of fitting 'as much emotion' as you could in a few lines~

Most effectively felt~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-09-22 09:24 AM

Sometimes I feel you have
wrapped a lifetime
in silk threads...

you do these so very well!

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

4 posted 2002-09-22 09:34 AM

Kris,
Another strong thought woven, from but a few threads.

I like the way you're able to do this.

~wranx

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".

~wranx~

Moon Dust

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since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

5 posted 2002-09-22 09:45 AM

its talent to be able to say what you feel in such few words. Enjoyed

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-09-22 03:48 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Kristopher, this is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to all these homeless and those who need love and I send my prayers and heart out to them all though they need so much more! (sigh) This is compassionately touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!