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| Open Poetry #22 |
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Eyes of Glass |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
eyes of glass turn winter pale, death takes this last advantage words broken and unending youth perspective twisted to elder vantage as bleached skin fawning in frozen snow we are virgins in a devil's dance fate laughs at our foolish desire as we seek to find a romance |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
OH... Sharon... you did it. YOU DID IT... this is fabulous... ohmygoddess...oh my... you are always clever in your write--but oh my dear friend...I could FEEL this. damn, I love you, yanno that? EXCELLENT. |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
this is wonderful.  |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Very well done... lovely metaphors, PDV  ~ tired chipmunk hugsLyra |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
in the words of yoda: "Do or do not. There is no try."  cool lines lady, excellent title not only in and of itself, but for the relationship (and clarifying nature) with the content. *smiles* |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
PdV, Eyes of glass...doesn't that make you blind? Then how is it you see so clearly? Hmmmmm... If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Lovers frozen in the snow of their age. Death, and light. Beautiful, Sharon. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
...we are virgins in a devil's dance... Great line, excellent write... Cool to be an angel with experience ThisDiamond |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Sharon, this is so very ntrue, it may sound so foolish when we search for love at first but then once it comes true then the joke is on fate! (big hugggssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you!!! This is written from an old challenge.  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
fate laughs at our foolish desire as we seek to find a romance Sharon, I think you just might be correct in these lines. Hope is that we might ourselves laugh off fate's grim outlook. Enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Fantastic, Sharon! Well done! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
fate laughs. . . but, I like getting the last laugh. . . great work. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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