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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-09-21 10:06 PM




Such A Sight
~*Marge Tindal*~


~Such a sight
this harvest of moon
Across the night in bright
light swoon ... Clearly seen
draping rays of everseem
Delicately in gossamer
across a dream~





~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (09-21-2002 10:17 PM).]

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Miah
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1 posted 2002-09-21 10:12 PM


Oh, this is very beautiful. I love it.

[This message has been edited by Miah (09-21-2002 10:12 PM).]

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2 posted 2002-09-21 11:19 PM


Marge:  You do such fantastic things to enhance your lovely poetry! It's always so spectacular in every way.

Betty Lou Hebert

Betty
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3 posted 2002-09-21 11:37 PM


This is so pretty & I love the way you did it.
LuvNHugz,
BETTY

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4 posted 2002-09-22 06:52 AM


Beautiful Marge! I love your artistic talent.
NewEnglandlazurlu
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5 posted 2002-09-22 09:32 AM


Such a sight indeed! At midnight last night, the moon was so bright, it lit up my whole neighborhood like it was daytime.

Sparkly job on this one, I love the way you did this.

Hugs, Marti

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6 posted 2002-09-22 09:34 AM


there isnt anything I can say that hasnt been said already except I enjoyed much

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2002-09-22 10:09 AM


Thank you all so much for enjoying my little moon-thoughts~
She just shows herself off so fancy for poets to pen~
I stepped outside last evening ...
and she just asked of me to write ONE MORE~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

Denise
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8 posted 2002-09-22 06:59 PM


Spectacular, Marge! Wow!
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9 posted 2002-09-22 07:36 PM


Luna was out to be adored and your poem is sparkle to please..I love this..moon hunger has struck again
Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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