Open Poetry #22 |
After All I'm Not A Quitter |
SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
~By Sue~ The days are so long and lonely All of the nights are much longer I struggle through the days Waiting for them to get better Trying to find the hope once there But dark clouds seem to follow me With nothing to look forward to All I want to do is to sleep I try to find something each day That will keep me busy To preoccupy my mind It seems there is no hope for me Sometimes I think about dying Thinking I will never make it Long enough to get myself Up out of this awful pit Depression seems to take it's hold Often times it's hard to stay up In my mind I often do think Everything here is just too much Then I think about the people With troubles worse than my own Some that will never go away When I am sitting here alone Some day my troubles will be gone And life will seem alot better If only I will just hang on After all I'm not a quitter 9-19-02 |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Now that is the spirit. I enjoyed this read. Great write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssss) Yes, perserverence is the key of true happiness, and you are a true woman of strength and determination and with it I know you will be happy! (sigh) I send hugs of courage to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sue, you are anything but a quitter. You are one of the biggest winners I know. One of the things you can do to keep busy is to keep writing. Your poems release so much of your emotions and that will help you get through the tough days and nights. And if you get down you email me. Hugs, Marti |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
That's my kind of spirit. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Your words prove that you are not a quitter Sue. Very well done gal. If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetFriend~ Losers quit ... you're not a loser~ Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Bravo Sue...you are the warrior who never quits! Love the last stanza! mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Sue~A wonderful write. With each new day comes new hope & strength that will carry us on to the next day. You have the right idea...Paul |
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