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So Much Like Falling
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So Much Like Falling |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia 
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So Much Like Falling Are your window panes still left with wet remains Cause, mine are still rolling in water from above Just pouring to a rhythm from top to it's edge For, the rains seem every bit of what I'm made of... I thought today would be unique once the sun had risen But, it's so much like falling to me Can't tell the difference between the earthly rain or mine It's continual flow makes it hard to see... Is that rain drenching your ground in puddles to quick too absorb Because, my grounds are like unexpected floods on a rise And, in background I hear the slight thunder roar Just don't want to measure it's load by it's size... It feels so much like falling barely know what's real I'm in a rhythm of confusement for the waters fall I would hope I would lose ground a little more Then, quickly the sun was moved after all... Does your view produce drops of water outside Cause mine's releasing faster then I can see through That haze in it's flow hardly a speck to peek among Feels so much like falling in brighter shades of blue... I know it's cloudy but I feel your rains not as hard as mine Perhaps it will let up as time goes by It's so much like falling like ever before How can I walk beneath the rain it's worked so hard for... Does in linger in ways throughout your days Lightening now to assure the rains display Feels so much like falling in this moments disguise The waters haunt me more then I can say here inside... Does your view find rain still in falling Because I believe it's only mine Does it leave ground a shade damp due to wetness For, it feels so much like falling this time... Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Incredibly descriptive Saunni, highly emotive and visual. Very well done indeed.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome write. I liked it a lot Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Gabriel Frost Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 216Between midnight thoughts |
I can relate.I know all too well the feeling of the rain falling on the inside.Well done! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Saunni, I understand this feeling all too well, sweet friend, I send hugs out to you and hope now he sun shines within you with joy, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Saunni, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Saunni Good write, enjoyed the read. |
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