Open Poetry #22 |
Enamored |
GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
Prolong me With swoops Falling I cut the chase to a starry careen, mesmerized by O B L I V I O N |
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EarthenSoul Member
since 2002-05-30
Posts 163WA, USA |
Very creative. Presented nicely. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautifully written Cold hands means a warm heart |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
WWOooOOOOOoooooo!!!!!!! |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I liked this...especially the presentation of oblivion. "two hearts will build the foundation for one point of light |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I loved the brevity and presentation. Well done. If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I am enamored by your words and style.. hrm..sorry I sound a bit cheesey today but hey blame it on the cocoa pebbles If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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