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EagleScorpion
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Here, Now, Forever

0 posted 2002-09-21 03:03 AM



So away and forever we take off on light searing boldly and truly through this distant night,

Carrying our sweet burden of love and it's memories painted forever upon canvas of mind,

Smelling the scent of the sweet inspiration that carried us through leaving that world behind,

O! What a sight!

My how I pain for how I couldnt have possibly known there could be such beauty and pleasure as this!

What wonderous love, O wonderous love, What wonderous love is this?

o my soul...

o...our soul

I have sent you nothing but angels, and I have placed nothing but miracles before you.

© Copyright 2002 Joseph Alexander Knob - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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1 posted 2002-09-21 03:11 AM


ES,
Cool! It seems Congratulations are in order?

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
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2 posted 2002-09-21 10:52 AM


You've captured the enthusiasm and excitement of this love, beautifully EagleScorpian ... much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

GOlDsparklESS
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since 2001-12-13
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central nj
3 posted 2002-09-21 03:30 PM


sigh... this is a darlin' poem... a DARLIN' poem...  
brian madden
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ireland
4 posted 2002-09-22 09:09 AM


sounds like cupid has got you, wonderful thoughts.

Too early for the rainbow, too early for the dove These are the final days, this is the darkness, this is the flood
L cohen

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