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brian sites
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0 posted 2002-09-21 02:33 AM


    a remarkable woman

She guards the kernel
buffeted by hateful wind
Time creates pearl heart


    the perfect voice

feather-stone, night-glow
dichotomy lives in song
to make mountains dance

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1 posted 2002-09-21 02:47 AM


mmm... just watched It's A Wonderful Life last night and I can see the correlation here.. such influence can come out of such simple things. This work is fabulous, mister! i congratulate you. remarkable insight

Life is a lonely journey to, and a heavy-hearted departure from three words. I LOVE YOU

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2 posted 2002-09-21 02:52 AM


non-haiku response:

I will take sharp edge to shell--
I'll find the key--the hidden door--
the tiny little piece of you,
that opens, giving so much more...

You have been too deep too long.
You have yearned my twist of wrist.
I have found a pearl within--
the nacre of you--loving this...

tell me I can taste the sea
reminder of the make of me--
whisper sweet sweet memory...
a grain of sand, turns into me...

love you.

[This message has been edited by serenity blaze (09-21-2002 02:54 AM).]

brian sites
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3 posted 2002-09-21 03:05 AM


cultivated

harvested

set in silver
you

love you
b

(thanks ES)

VAS
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4 posted 2002-09-21 03:33 PM


good ones again, Brian, glad you reposted, I missed them before

even with "dichotomy" you still had room to make sense

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Miah
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5 posted 2002-09-21 03:37 PM


Very lovely.  
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6 posted 2002-09-21 03:40 PM


Excellent...love them!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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7 posted 2002-09-21 09:15 PM




(smiles) Oh Brian, this is sooooooo lovely, I could sure feel the mountains dancing reading this beside me in Colorado, this is excellent, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brian, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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8 posted 2002-09-22 03:17 AM


Brian,
Wind in mountain trees.
Her image and the moon.

Dude, now I've gotta write a poem before I go to sleep.

brian sites
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9 posted 2002-09-22 03:26 AM


Virginia -- God, you are so sweet
             Thank you, lady
Miah -- Thank you
Enchantress -- I'll take that hug
               Thank you
Noah --  you keep this place alive,
         young man.   Thank you
Mike --- you, buddy, understand
         write down the moon
        
brian

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