Open Poetry #22 |
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In you end |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee ![]() |
When I hear that honey song smoke into my sensitive I feel like there is an end of me deep in you I can see me there leaning back into the beginning of intimacy When the day is completely swollen And you aren't a haze any longer and I am more than a final thought I hear myself sleep talk loud wanting to be the other end of always touching Wanting to be the bottomless end of your private ocean Endlessly flowing like the emotions of a favorite movie rolling through ~The end~ of me
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
cool told tale o yuh sens you all as all ways yuh |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
warm sensations here, Reg... and good vibrations... lots of sound in this one... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
regina.. other ends wanting to be other ends..your inspire is glazed in prime babe. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is beautiful and sure is one of my favorite movies of yours, this is an intimate classic, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Regina, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Essorant Member Elite
since 2002-08-10
Posts 4769Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada |
Rwood, Lovely thoughts written. A pleasure to read. Essorant |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Regina....you always leave me speechless.. and starning at the screen shaking my head, thinking 'How does she do this?!' Amazing writing...just amazing. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Magician Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 126 |
My favorite lines... I feel like there is an end of me deep in you I can't get those lines out of my head, I wish I wrote that. j/k Very interesting ideas in here. I feel like writing something now. |
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Gabriel Frost Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 216Between midnight thoughts |
Lovely portrayal of thoughts and emotion. I just love it! ![]() |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
rwood When I read your sound and fury It makes me feel a jury. Lovely ![]() |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Very Beautiful...enjoyed very much. DeaDiAmore |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
smoke into my sensitive I feel like there is an end of me deep in you I can see me there leaning back into the beginning of intimacy When the day is completely swollen And you aren't a haze any longer and I am more than a final thought ============================== wanting to be the other end of always touching Wanting to be the bottomless end of your private ocean ================================== smoke into my sensitive now how cool and sensual is that line ![]() the yearn and burn of it all is well felt in this emotively lovely piece Reg... does this kind of inspire come in a bottle? I need me some muse infusion ![]() If all the tear drops went to heaven |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
never disappointing...always truly awesome... ![]() |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Reg, I think with you there is no end, just a complete circle neverending. Well done m'girl. Hugs. somebody tell me, please help me.... |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
the dearest lines… When I hear that honey song smoke into my sensitive I feel like there is an end of me ~ When the day is completely swollen ~ and I am more than a final thought ~ your private ocean ~ rolling through ~The end~ of me ~ a longing, but not of desperation… a healthy kind of hunger. this aches, regina, and rolls out like waves, lingering… lovely. [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Cor (08-20-2002 06:17 AM).] |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
You always write with such vivid visuals, Reg... I am now visualizing a pregnant day... I totally enjoyed. ![]() Lyra |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You caused me to smile with this one as it brought back a memory for me of a ache I used to carry with me all day until I saw his face. Regina, as usual this was totally exquisite writing. My favorite ... "And you aren't a haze any longer and I am more than a final thought" |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Oh this is truly lovely. Awesome writing. Enjoyed it so much. |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
1derfully done! I love it ![]() |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Very very cool and special, Regina !! mycafe Keep counting your blessings [This message has been edited by mycafe (08-21-2002 02:41 AM).] |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Reg, If this talent rubs off...I'd like to get real close to you! I looked in the dictionary and your picture was next to the word "sensual". I need say no more. ![]() If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I can see me there leaning back into the beginning of intimacy When the day is completely swollen And you aren't a haze any longer and I am more than a final thought Damn, this is good. Very good! ...more than a final thought. Damn! |
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bsquirrel![]()
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
That one made me breath catch, and I still can't get it back. |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Man-oh-man, your words simply amaze me. Enjoyed this very much. Chris ![]() Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I can, but echo the above comments. All of them. ~wranx In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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Moonlight Romeo![]() ![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
There's only one word that can describe this. Passion. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
YES! This is so totally cool. I love your emotional imagery. "I can see me there leaning back into the beginning of intimacy When the day is completely swollen And you aren't a haze any longer and I am more than a final thought" WOW! |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You rock! ![]() |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Reg, I gotta play it again, one more time. Miss you and hope all is well. ![]() If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
*BUMP* |
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