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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-09-20 08:20 PM



Where Poetry Grew
~*Marge Tindal*~

In the quiet of porch-swing read
that's where this poetess found seed
Print of verse in hands so small
reaching out ... touching all~

All I am ... or hoped to be
seeded in the pages of poetry
"Yes ... you can."Grandma said,
filling up my writer's head~

Dare that I, should even try
to cultivate a writer's dream
Seeding the ink of thought
across the pages of everseem~

~*~

She believed in me
long before I knew
that I could believe in myself ....

The porch swing still calls the little girl of me
and I return to those days on a train-of-thought
"Grandma", I whisper, " Are you there?"
"Yes, child .... I am always here."

~Oh, Grandma ... listen to this
I wrote it just for you~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2002-09-20 08:38 PM


"are that I, should even try
to cultivate a writer's dream
Seeding the ink of thought
across the pages of everseem~"

Oh, Marge. Here you go with my favorite "little ink of think" ... oh, how I love it when you let this particular muse flow so beautifully. What a wonderful tribute to your grandmother. I just loved this.

Best wishes,
/Kit

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2 posted 2002-09-20 08:41 PM


Marge - I can feel your thoughts when I read this. It's really precious...

BC

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3 posted 2002-09-20 08:43 PM


Oh Marge!  This was simply beautiful and the images portrayed through your words were just wonderful.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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4 posted 2002-09-20 09:19 PM


Marge, this is so beautiful. Just like all of your poetry. I think it is a wonderful thing to have someone who believes in you.
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5 posted 2002-09-20 09:19 PM


I can feel your grandmother giving you a slight push in the right direction. Grandmothers are such great confidence builders. Right Grandma? I really love this.
LuvNHugz,
Betty

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6 posted 2002-09-20 09:22 PM


I bow to you in all humility. This appealed to me on all levels and this is a shining testament of your talents as a poet. It touched me on so many levels.

~ Your Grandma is sweetly smiling down on her beloved grandaughter with pride and adoration ~

Linda

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7 posted 2002-09-20 09:31 PM


Beautiful Margie girl!!
Your Grandma is smiling down at you..
and just loves this one!
So do I!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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8 posted 2002-09-20 09:56 PM


Marge:  A lovely, tender poem and I'm sure you have far exceeded your Grandma's hopes for you.  Strangely enough, it was my grandmother who encouraged me to write poetry also, when I was ten.  She didn't live long enough to read more than my first attempts.

Betty Lou Hebert

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9 posted 2002-09-20 10:22 PM


A lot of comfort and inspiration here, Marge!!!

Cor

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10 posted 2002-09-20 10:36 PM


Marg, Bing bing bing
those are my happy bells going off
after reading, and mostly FEELING this.
Again, when you put verses together
you really hit your stride.
Take us along for the ride again, won't you?
Evenin Ma'am,
jeff

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11 posted 2002-09-20 11:35 PM


Marge

So sweet the la la la of love and inspiration...and just a nudge of words inspire.  

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12 posted 2002-09-20 11:37 PM


awww reminds me of my grandma

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

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13 posted 2002-09-21 09:33 AM


very much enjoying this one......

quite a story teller you are...   cant wait to read what little miss delaney will be writing........

hugs, g

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14 posted 2002-09-21 11:57 AM


This is so touching to me, it reminds me of my Grandmother, who always had faith in me even when nobody else did.Before she passed away I wrote her a poem, i was younger at the time and i didn't think it was poetic enough to submit i guess.But after reading this, i think i will.You've inspired me.
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15 posted 2002-09-21 12:24 PM


and it grew.....so very beautifuly Marge...and the words blossomed into a gift for all to behold.....HUGS LADY

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

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16 posted 2002-09-21 05:46 PM


Marge, so lovely! How I love these stories where the evidence is so clear in all the magical ways we shape each others lives!!  Hugs, Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Marge Tindal
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17 posted 2002-09-21 08:25 PM


~Friends~
I so appreciate each message left on this piece~
My great grandma was gracefully loving and kind~
She ran a tough little ship when it came to believing in my abilities ... and encouraging me to reach beyond myself through my writing ... she passed away when I was a teen ... but ... I never, ever forgot about the faith she had in me !
I've tried to open up and 'listen' and then to share with others ... AND I go to the porch swing yet to be close to the spirit of her~
She is 'always here'~

You all are so kind .... and I appreciate you more than I'm able to say~
Honest Injun !
Love n' hugs~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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18 posted 2002-09-23 12:12 PM


This is so beautiful... both the poem and the love that nourished the poet. *S*
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