Open Poetry #22 |
to my surprise. |
haydenjames Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 164Antigua & Barbuda |
My last laughs are left unsaid tossed to a wind that doesn’t blow your direction. Frolicking in oblique places with new eyes that peruse me with care for my every aspect. With glamour she makes every beautiful flower beg for the grace of her smile, more vivid than the sun’s light at daybreak. To which, yes, the days are thus shortened for you’ve lengthened my nocturnal hours; consequence of your swallow. Being created like a timeless old lady’s knit, we intertwine a fabric built on trust of similarities. Resulting in a design of symmetrical love which all came to be, to my surprise. You helped loosen my grip, finger by finger on a yesterday that had no tomorrow. With unequaled patience a give and take you, now is evident. Hid within your lips the taste of ecstasy which you three times confirm true. The same wind I laugh into, you breathe in and purify upon exhale. Tis’ why the way the ocean waves of you puzzle me, as you quietly wash-up my shores. Your waters recede, you take me with you into a deep blue state now crystal clear. Yet, all what is and what was, are indeed to my surprise. -- Would like to know what you think... My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I think this is pretty. Some vivid images. Nan(Pilgrim variety) |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Hayden, Beautiful indeed. Packed with images to feed the soul. This is one of many of my favorite lines. quote: I'm impressed. ~Sheri "Don't wait for your ship to come in ... Swim out to it" [This message has been edited by Irie (09-20-2002 06:32 PM).] |
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Harmony Junior Member
since 2002-09-12
Posts 27GB |
Beautiful i liked this very, very much |
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haydenjames Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 164Antigua & Barbuda |
thanks everyone. Your words are like wood to a fire... My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org |
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