Open Poetry #22 |
The Sun Still Shines |
the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Even on a bad The sun still shines No matter how bad it is Sometimes it can bring you Out of the sad mood The sun still shines For one and all When the sun shines Something good is bound to happen Like make a new friend Make ammends with your boyfriend And hope he understands how you feel When you talk to him about things that Bug you that he does When the sun shines It is always a perfect time To get out into nature And see the sites And everything that God above Has created for us it is a time To travel To walk To hang out with friends in a park To go for a swim Or just do whatever you want The sun still shines Down on you and me Make the best of it While it is out Before the rain comes And ruins this beautiful day Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Ah, Loner, I do like the way you use your words here! As I read, it made me realize that I needed to make better use of the days of sunshine, before the days of rain get here! Good one! The music is playing..it's your turn to dance! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
the sun is the smile and the rain is the pain... let's not let smiles be in vain... here's one for you ... regards, sudhir |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
The sun in my world is you Julie. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Calling Sunshine, calling Sunshine. Please send your rays down to us and like make us happy Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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EarthenSoul Member
since 2002-05-30
Posts 163WA, USA |
Thanx for the reminder. We've had an unusually gorgeous summer in Western Washington and I know there's about four gray months of rain on the way! Nice poem. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Enjoyed the happier and "sunnier" tone to this write. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) I love this wonderful upbeat sentiment, sweet friend, you are sunshine to us all and we all too wish you many sun-shining days always, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I do like this a lot. Sometimes I like to sit on the dock and just watch the sun as it sets, while it throws its magic across the waters. |
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