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VAS
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0 posted 2002-09-20 09:24 AM



Autumn

autumn’s gentle breeze caresses
softly through her golden tresses
lifting lovely scents to rise
wafting by in sweet reprise
as if a melody adrift
unto my heart a wondrous gift

©September 18, 2002
Virginia Salter

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2002 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-09-20 09:27 AM


VAS,
Good thoughts, good write, good read, enjoyed

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2002-09-20 09:29 AM


Thank you for this "wondrous gift"!

~ enjoy your day! ~

EA

the_loner_23
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3 posted 2002-09-20 10:16 AM


Good write. I love autumn

Cold hands means a warm heart

Sunnyone
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4 posted 2002-09-20 11:42 AM



I can almost feel the leaves crunching, and lately these mornings I actually notice that familiar nip in the wee hours of the morn. Great and peaceful write, my friend.

The music is playing..it's your turn to dance! 
    


Sudhir Iyer
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5 posted 2002-09-20 11:58 AM


I like that melody ...

Regards,
sudhir

NewEnglandlazurlu
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6 posted 2002-09-20 12:12 PM


Virginia, there is something special about the scents of Autumn.

This was so lovely.

Hugs, Marti



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7 posted 2002-09-20 12:25 PM


Wonderful autumnal piece and I love it!

You do the season so very well!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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8 posted 2002-09-20 11:34 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love the autumn so much and you paint its precious colors so wonderfully here! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, your words are like that fall zephyr caressing these pages, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank youn for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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9 posted 2002-09-20 11:39 PM


beauiful yes autm as hit home as well and its given the place a magically golden type feel its my faveorite season

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

Gabriel Frost
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Between midnight thoughts
10 posted 2002-09-21 10:51 AM


This is just lovely, such beautiful words.Indeed soft music would be quite fitting to this wonderful piece.
Kit McCallum
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11 posted 2002-09-21 10:54 AM


What a lovely and visual piece, Virginia ... very much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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