Open Poetry #22 |
Autumn |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Autumn autumn’s gentle breeze caresses softly through her golden tresses lifting lovely scents to rise wafting by in sweet reprise as if a melody adrift unto my heart a wondrous gift ©September 18, 2002 Virginia Salter Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
VAS, Good thoughts, good write, good read, enjoyed |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Thank you for this "wondrous gift"! ~ enjoy your day! ~ EA |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Good write. I love autumn Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I can almost feel the leaves crunching, and lately these mornings I actually notice that familiar nip in the wee hours of the morn. Great and peaceful write, my friend. The music is playing..it's your turn to dance! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
I like that melody ... Regards, sudhir |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Virginia, there is something special about the scents of Autumn. This was so lovely. Hugs, Marti |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wonderful autumnal piece and I love it! You do the season so very well! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love the autumn so much and you paint its precious colors so wonderfully here! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, your words are like that fall zephyr caressing these pages, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank youn for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
beauiful yes autm as hit home as well and its given the place a magically golden type feel its my faveorite season If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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Gabriel Frost Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 216Between midnight thoughts |
This is just lovely, such beautiful words.Indeed soft music would be quite fitting to this wonderful piece. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a lovely and visual piece, Virginia ... very much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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