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SmartChick
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0 posted 2002-09-20 08:12 AM


Help Me Understand
~By Sue~

Being confused by his actions
A desire he once claimed to have
Does not seem to be true
It seems it is all in the past

I gave him all I had to give
He threw it all away
Help me to understand
Why he chose not to stay

I remember all he had said
Was it only a show
He put on just for me
I really need to know

Is it mid-life crises
Like some people do say
I do not understand
Someone help me today

9-20-02



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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-09-20 08:16 AM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Sue, my heart goes out to you, I know how confusing it ay sound but know you truly are blessed and if he can't reach out to you he doesn't deserve your friendship and you will find the most truest affection! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Toerag
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2 posted 2002-09-20 08:22 AM


Sad but I can tell by your writing you're a smart chick and can handle anything...even those fish!
the_loner_23
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3 posted 2002-09-20 10:19 AM


Sad but sometimes it is good to get the negetive feelings out. Good write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2002-09-20 11:04 AM


If I understood why, dear Sue, I'd be telling you all that I knew! But, like you, I'm still asking myself "Why?" !

~ trust me, the sun will shine again---even
  brighter! ~

EA

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