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the agony of ecstacy
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the agony of ecstacy |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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There's weight to pain of emptiness. There is a hole within my chest. Nothing--NO THING--else will do... How can peace rage with restlessness? "My God? My Goddess," (palms to sky) "What is it that I did this time?" Give to me a chance, lament, allow me just one sweet penance... I will be your shining star. I'll take your pain. I'll kiss your scars. If there is drought? I'll become rain. And then I'll be the sun again. My arms will bow across the sky in all the colors that I cried... I promise you. I will be good. Do all the things I swore I would-- but dance with me throughout the night, and keep me still from my own fright. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
I am here though the mail run slow through rain sleet hail and snow you are the rainbow sigh b |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling....a moth just came and landed on the screen... oh...  damn I worry. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
no need to ssllloooowwwwww sigh again |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
get some rest, lovie. tomorrow is another wait. lol. dream sweet. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
palms to sky...... goodnight |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I hope you are not reading this reply right now---you should be sleeping! You were up most of the night in a state of restlessness---but I for one, am happy that the restlessness gave rise to this exquisite piece of writing! EA |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Wow. Incredible! Damn. Will try to form a whole sentence here shortly...lol. I think I understand every single word of this. You, too...huh? |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
i think i got it bad, dunc...  |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
Oh, Oh,  I hate it when I get mushy. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Dance around those moonlit trees again, twirl and hug yourself while chanting, 'I kiss the stars and thank them for my serenity.' |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Karen, Peace to you and serenity too. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Oh yes. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
 Thank you, good poet people. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Dang. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
You know, I could have sworn I replied to this. Apparently not. Perhaps I'm becoming delusional. *chases a flying purple elephant* Hmm. Let's not analyze that. Sorry, I'm rambling again. Bad habit...  And I'm doing it again.  I really enjoyed this poem, it was vivid, wonderful.  Wow... all that just to say I liked it. *mops sweat off brow* Kielo Now where did that elephant go? |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssss) Oh Karen, this is so powerfully heartaching, sweet friend, I wish for this gentle compassionate love to touch your heart and make you feel safe and secure when you need it the most! This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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