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Open Poetry #22

Crystal Waters

Secret Whisper
Member

since 2001-01-25

Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass

0 posted 2002-09-20 12:14 PM

I wasn’t made for the sea,
The rise and fall of waves.
Disappearing beneath the water crests,
Diving into a deep blue tranquility,
Finding myself blind in the dark recesses,
Consorting with the living coral,
And gentle current undulates.

I am consumed by the depths.
Making my home among the stones and the sands.
Time will wash away my likeness,
And light never penetrating to my crystal blue-grey eyes.

I am fallen beneath the waves.
Gathering the rippling waters to my breast,
Feeling fully their chilled embrace,
Here in the depths.

"See, no one loves..." - Prayers for Rain

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2002-09-20 03:21 AM

I like ripples, even the ones that flow deep. Maybe they are the ones that contain the deepest truths?

May ripples of LOVE
become waves of PEACE

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2002-09-20 09:16 AM

I think your vision is "crystal clear" and you had an interesting way of conveying that.
I enjoyed the depth of your writing.

~ smiles ~
EA

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2002-09-20 09:25 AM

Secret Whisper
Good thoughts, good write, good read.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

4 posted 2002-09-20 10:18 AM

This has beautiful descriptions. I love the water. Good write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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