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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-09-13 11:14 AM

Energized by an evening of dancing
holding you close
smelling your hair
my nostrils filled with your scent
we sit and share the moonlight
cuddling
anticipating
sharing
that’s the best part
. . .
sharing
each other

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-09-13 11:16 AM

(sigh) This is sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I know your love will swoon when she reads this as this shines with true passion and warmth, this is beautiful, your poetry is always a party, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-13-2002 11:16 AM).]

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2002-09-13 11:18 AM

Humph!!! out rascalled by the best it seems... now I am jealous!!!!

(chuckling)

Very tender my friend...very tender indeed.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2002-09-13 11:20 AM

Noah ~
why thank you, sir

Ron ~
I learned at the feet of the best, Capt., sir

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2002-09-13 11:20 AM

What a perfectly wonderful evening--and poem!

Earth Angel

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-09-13 11:36 AM

Sounds wonderful Interloper...
But I've never heard of a dance called
the buckle polisher...

Good stuff cowboy!
~Hugs~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2002-09-13 11:40 AM

Well, I surely don't know who this is for, but I can bet that your dance card will fill up, for sure...

that's ONE way of keeping that buckle polished....

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2002-09-13 11:45 AM

LOL at Nancy's reply.
Well done. BTW, is my name on your dance card list?

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2002-09-13 12:09 PM

Interloper

So many good parts, anticipating, sharing, cuddling. This feels like love-ly.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

9 posted 2002-09-13 12:27 PM

My oh, my....if this is for me...I am blushing. If it isn't for me, I am blushing from embarrassment. Some lucky lady (maybe me) has a romantic evening ahead of her. Wonderful. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

10 posted 2002-09-13 12:33 PM

All the best parts to you my friend

ThisDiamond

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

11 posted 2002-09-13 01:05 PM

Linda ~
What a perfectly wonderful reply

Nancy Lee ~
A buckle polisher is a long, slow, sensual dance. We are particularly good at buckle polishng in Texas!

Sunshine ~
Hmmmmm. Down here in Texas the gals keep the dance cards. We fellers just fight to get on them. Of course, it does help to be either bery big or a very good dancer

Kacy ~
See above. I'd ask for mine to be included on yours, though ... unless your man was upset, then I'd demure

Martie ~
Yes, thank you. That's kinda how I intended it to be

Chris ~
I will always make time for you. You are my hero!

TD ~
Thanks for the "best" parts. At least I will have a good foundation upon which to build

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

12 posted 2002-09-19 11:45 AM

Bob darling heart, you don’t know how glad I am to see a poem by you, and this is particularly fine. I would temporise and say this is going to be a short reply, but it probably won’t be, simply because I can’t do them. Well, I can, but I always feel I’m short-changing the writer and I never wish to short-change you. (Besides which darling heart YOU know if I said short it wouldn’t be)

This is stunning writing, so incredibly real, so totally in the present. There are those who write in beautiful flowing script describe poetic wonder, and they are good, I don’t deny that they are. But you combine an element of being there, the immediacy of the now, and there are so few writers who can do that with conviction. And you do time after time after time. Truly this is superb and I love it utterly utterly utterly love it. (Oh look it’s an almost brief reply,) well, almost is good.

This is fabulous and you know I love it don’t you? Mmmm I do indeed, very much

Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

13 posted 2002-09-20 11:33 AM

A poem like this can sure make a gal dream, Interloper... even if she knows she's doomed to only dream. *S* It's beautiful!

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

14 posted 2002-09-20 11:34 AM

I like this poem. Good write

Cold hands means a warm heart

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

15 posted 2002-09-20 12:16 PM

Mushy ~
I'm speechless ...

suthern ~
Nobody is doomed only to dream

the_loner_23 ~
Thank you very much

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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