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Whisper To The Moon
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Whisper To The Moon |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“WHISPER TO THE MOON” by Bill Charles ~~~~ This evening was of elegance, as the sun fell, touching down… A radiant moon came out shining, caressing the mountain’s crown… It sparkled upon the glacier, highlighting its magnificence… Took my deepest breath away, my heart beat with eloquence … I looked up, gazed my eyes, words of wonderment came… Magical moments was my forte, moonlight lit the sky aflame… Nature in breathtaking splendor, reminds me of you in tune… Wanted the magic to continue, perhaps if I whisper to the moon… ~~~~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Aha! Yet another poem containing that word!  Yes...the Harvest moon is just about full Bill...and a beauty she is... One that inspires poems such as this. Well done. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
If words won't do, will a sigh suffice? This is lovely Bill!! Thank you for a delightful read~ If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I think whispers work. I do it all the time, oh wait, maybe not.  This is lovely Bill, simply lovely. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Bill, this is beautiful, I love the common theme so many are showing in their poetry today for the Harvest Moon and your wonderful words sparkle with the magic! (big hugggssssss) This is delightful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This ode to mother moon was magical. May your nights be full of moonlight. Linda |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A lovely tribute to the one who lights the nightime sky... beautifully vivid, Bill  ~ chipmunk hugs from beneath the earthLyra |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Can always tell when the moon is getting to the right phase...BC and Marge both start writing beautiful Moon poetry... Such is the time right now... Thanx Bill... |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
'...Nature in breathtaking splendor...' And words of breathtaking splendor. The Harvest Moon over New England tonight is covered slightly by a haze that gives off an eerie feel. How I would love to see it over your mountain. Hugs, Marti Every now and then take a good look at something not made |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BillCharles~ 'perhaps if I whisper to the moon…' Indeed .... I was summoned out by those 'whispers'~ She's as lovely as your poem~ Love n' hugs~ *Thanks, Magnus~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Don't ask ... BEG!!!!! Fantastic scenario Bill. |
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