Open Poetry #22 |
Upon Star Dust |
Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Upon Star Dust I'm elevated to the sky where the star dust begins Riding it's fall to the earth here below At this height I can see what very few can So, I hold on to it's graceful flow... On my way down to the ground I've captured so much Nature at it's finest looking over it all Never thought I'd keep finer ornaments of faith As I'd shimmer and tenderly fall... Here, rain fell like iridescent icicles on a roll Taking on the light but leaving a pearl sequenced view It's like the wind spoke through a megaphone to those willing to hear And, nothing more could phase me for what I just went through... Star dust exists but always it's destination is the ground Calm to the soul and never ever makes a sound Oh, and those leaves had a shade all their own left from the sun And, I witnessed sundown to take all it had done... The night found hills so dark and bold to the eyes But, I can't tell you what it felt like to fall from the skies My landing on feet there on glowing streets Gave way for the star dust and nature to meet... Then I watched water and it's fine layer in distance wear off And, the star dust twinkled as it rested along the top Waters never shined more then what I saw this night Glowing in darkness to a moment that can't be taken by life... Oh, upon star dust and it's soft end to the earth Led way to a memory that's just given birth I saw it all through the eyes of content Hope I get the chance to ride the star dust again... Green grass sparkled in dust only the star gave to it Far more brilliant then the moon when it's lit I was on a ride with grace face to face Landing with the star dust along wildlife's place... I was upon star dust and it's earthly force So, may the fall from heaven someday be yours And, when you catch your eyes on light never seen You'll know it's that star dust directing me... Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Oh Saunni it is good to read your words again, and what a lovely gift you have gifted us with. BEAUTIFUL! If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is just beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
angels fall too Love this one, girl! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"I was upon star dust and it's earthly force So, may the fall from heaven someday be yours And, when you catch your eyes on light never seen You'll know it's that star dust directing me..." (smiles) Yay!!! Awwwwwwww, I have missed you and your beautiful words so so much, yay, I'm so happy you're back and spreading angel dust across these pages, may you find your heavens always dawning down upon your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Saunni, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Here, rain fell like iridescent icicles on a roll Taking on the light but leaving a pearl sequenced view It's like the wind spoke through a megaphone to those willing to hear And, nothing more could phase me for what I just went through..." Welcome back home, Saunni. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Suanni, There you are! If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I thought I saw something a little unusual in the southern skies the other night... Now... I know it was you, Saunni... Its grand to see you again. ~ hugs from my underground burrow Lyra |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Magical! Mysitical! Simply Marvellous! ~ from across the span of time ~ Earth Angel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Saunni enjoyed. |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Stars shine brightest when they're loved. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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FuzzyFrazzledFraggle Member
since 2002-09-20
Posts 155Fraggle Rock |
Much enjoyed! I am with the others, beautiful...look forward to more of your wonderful words.. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
there's no doubt in my mind that you are indeed a star my friend. . . keep shining. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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