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The Monochromatic Blues
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The Monochromatic Blues |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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Today I sang the song of you in monochromatic blue, palest hue as winds blew in from the north, chilling me to the bone. Once again, I am alone. How was I to know the song we sang together would die giving birth to the chorus of Love? The notes are all flat. Minor notes they were, to your ears. For me? a major crescendo. A cacophony of turbulent emotions tossed about recklessly, like some 3rd rate rock 'n roll. And now all I can do is sit here and sing in monochromatic blue, missing you. Once again, I am alone. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
The notes are all flat. Minor notes they were, to your ears. For me? a major crescendo. When the music we hear is not the same it indeed can be just as you describe in these lines... sad piece... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
This is a sad write. One, I hope, born from your imagination and not of reality. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
How sad. Yet still a good write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
"And now all I can do is sit here and sing in monochromatic blue, missing you. Once again, I am alone." This, is when I put on a lot of "old" Bonnie Raitt, and just wallow in it. (nothing after '84) ~Ed |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Oh Kacy, sometimes the songs fade way to quickly. And sometimes a little blues cures what hurts inside....well done writing hon. Hugs. If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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