Open Poetry #22 |
We See and See |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
We See and See My eyes that look, see and see Depending on the thought that be? I see your hair, your length and bear And with my inner eye your fair. Most will see a common birth But to me you are the earth. While most will look on common wear I will see an angel there. You walk this world as one in many But to me you are uncanny. Each time I look upon your face My beating heart goes into space. My mind goes into weightlessness And all of this I do confess. I orb about your essence hour Like a bee about a flower You are my grail, door that’s dup And are the content of the cup. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"You walk this world as one in many But to me you are uncanny. Each time I look upon your face My beating heart goes into space." (smiles) Awwwwww your wonderful words always get us lost in poetic space, I love it! (big hugggsssss) May you always quench your thirst with her smiles of comfort from the grail of life, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Beautiful, very beautiful Liz |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
After putting on my bi-focals so I could "see" this wonderful poem, I "see" you "see" things in such a wonderful prospective....(I never put on my glasses till I leave home and get away from the mirrors...it'a an awful view from where I'm standing)..... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
..."And with my inner eye your fair"... You are a man who sees the beauty within as well as the beauty without. ~ May your day be as lovely as this poem! ~ EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah to see the world through your eyes, Sy! Delicious morning read... ~Morning hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you for this, Sy... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A beautiful sight Sey and lovely morning read. Thank you m' friend. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Seymour - nice read this fine morning... BC |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Thank you my friend. Elizabeth, Toe, You need a new prescription. Thanks and have a good one. Enchantress, I'll take your Morning hugs and up you two more. Sunshine, Gentle Spirit Thank you sweet. Bill, Thank you for the read. Earth Angel, Thank you dear. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Ain't it wonderfulw hat one can see when they open not only their eyes, but their minds? Well done my friend Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Interloper You are right, thank you my friend. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy The best part of a play, is what goes on behind the curtain. Most of us don't look that far. Loved this! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, That's true, thank you. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Most will see a common birth But to me you are the earth. While most will look on common wear I will see an angel there. You walk this world as one in many But to me you are uncanny. Each time I look upon your face My beating heart goes into space. ==================================== Now what a coincidence?!!...... the same things happen every day when I click on your name When Randy writes heart on sleeve... its a tender render of reprieve. *ww* |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Most will see a common birth But to me you are the earth. While most will look on common wear I will see an angel there Seymour - I had an appointment this morning and missed out on early reads. But this is just as beautiful with my mid-afternoon tea. Lovely. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. [This message has been edited by Nightshade (09-19-2002 03:11 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Randy has been wiping his nose on his wing He doesn't care for long winged shirts. But if you look close you can see the writing there. And it's all about a moth. WWRS |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, No matter as long as you got to read it and reply. Thank you |
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