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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise 
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 Gently, softly..... Lulled into peaceful dreams Lightly wafting loves sweet schemes As a feather flits upon silken breeze Passion's night, sweet memories Tender kisses...... Lips melded in desire lighting hearts and souls on fire fully ripe, and velvet to touch receives the love she wants so much Love awaits…. He wants to take her there with passions strong and love so fair Abandoned now to his embraces Satiated secret places Awakenings….. The dawning of first light Fearing so her lover's flight Upon her pillow.. one red rose To remind her of the love she knows Poetry is: |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautifully written Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Sigh. Lovely images. Nan(Pilgrim variety) |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Exsquite! ThisDiamond |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
This outdoes me.  What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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sean_krazy Junior Member
since 2002-09-14
Posts 33 |
i dont knwo what to say...probably wow?? sean (sean_krazy) |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
the loner: hello and thanks for your time  pilgrimage:Nan thanks for that sigh  I think it means I did succeed..smilesthis Diamond:thanks for being a gem and commenting on this... Thudermage; naw..our poetry is just all different like flowers amking up the whole garden..thanks so much! Sean: well me either I sit for hours sometimes to make my muse write aloha and hugs to all, Cher Poetry is: |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful Cher...I recently got into a little trouble for not giving a friend of mine a rose...she was a little hurt...James |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
James: Don't forget those romantic touches like roses..we wahines do like that much! thanks for the read, comments and aloha, Cher Poetry is: |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
CSKpoet - I do love roses, especially to see her face when they are presented to her... BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful write Cher! Much enjoyed this treasure. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Oh now you know I love this. Should be white though  j/k It's beautiful Cher. |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Bill: ah i would expect you to be a romantic rose giver  thanks for the kind wordsEnchantress: Thanks Nancy Lee, you are always such a smile maker and an encouraging lady with a kind comment. White Rose: well....you are just a special rose! thanks for always being there with your sweet and kind comments hugs to all, Cher Poetry is: |
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