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Open Poetry #22

so si it tea

Effigy
Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 486
disbelief

0 posted 2002-09-18 04:21 PM

Vulnerably you sit with with your head down.

Ill-advised, imperfection
raging rationality, ravishing radiance.
terror throughout tranquility
unadulterated, uncompromising
abysmal, abundant ailment
living lawlessness.

Vacant eyes blink in confusion.

Paradox, painting persecution's perseption
adjoining aggression
naturally naive, narcissistic nil
damnation in deafing deception
embellished ecstacy exciting endless enigma
meditating man's malevolent medley
oppression, opprobrium origin
nomad, nurturing nepotism
instinctivly isolating innocence
unintelligible, undesirable
miraculously mesmerizing.

[This message has been edited by Effigy (09-18-2002 04:22 PM).]

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2002-09-18 04:51 PM

Effigy,
I don't know whether it is tea or not, but you have done alliteration to a "T"

Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-09-18 05:44 PM

Awesome write

Cold hands means a warm heart

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