Open Poetry #22 |
Held In Hush |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Held In Hush you show me stars and never once remind me how far away they are and when my dreams seem like total eclipse a heavenly body brushes my lips at times my mind runs too fast seems I am all in a rush you are my place of calm there and only there my heart is held in hush I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
held in hush... such a wondeful place for a heart to be held... very tender.. very tender indeed |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
heart tenderly held this quiet place in my soul accepts your sweet love Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is just beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lovely once again Helen. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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sean_krazy Junior Member
since 2002-09-14
Posts 33 |
aww...this is such a good poem...damn..i feel my poems aren't as good when i read every one elses ((. i wish i had a gurl with whom i could put close to my heart and all the sounds go hush later sean (sean_krazy) |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
helen - hush is lovely whispers... BC |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ah Slick... you never cease to amaze... jwesley |
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admirer New Member
since 2002-09-18
Posts 3Montana |
lovely |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh, I love this...it's a keeper~ Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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