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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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It's not a place that I should go but feel the need of such and so I walk the block that seems a mile hiding inward thoughts, meanwhile along the way I speak to self which one shall have me, on the shelf? or maybe brew of dark instead to stop these thoughts that fill this head... a few more steps to reach the door to saunter in and ask once more I'll take a Russian, white, to please and sooth this throat, will down with ease and maybe then, 'twill matter not the walk uphill of once forgot. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very good poem Cold hands means a warm heart |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Sometimes you just gotta go there if only to take the edge off temporarily. It's ok Maureen...and I hope it helped. I liked the gist of this.... hugs and cheers to you girlfriend!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
....I've had a couple of those....a couple too many, couldn't walk at all then! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah been there done that.... sometimes it helps and sometimes it just makes it worse.. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I've had my share of those..*sigh* methinks I need something to that nature right about now..but it doesn't really help the frame of mind I'm in at the moment...we are talking about the same thing right!?  Im not good at disecting poems and finding the meaning I'm usually off beat..c'est la vie..If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You lay bare and naked with these thoughts. I almost feel like a voyeur; however, this glimpse into a private moment in your life was a privilege to share with you. ~ take care ~ Linda |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Cute write M, and hope the white russian helped ease the throat pain. If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Be careful of those White Russians ...  If you take two to "escort" you, you may never get "there." Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you guys are funny...for those who understand...I don't like spirits..but yesterday, one was all I needed to ease my thoughts...and allow me to walk a few blocks and get some exercise in the process *s and if you ever see me have more than one..then you will be seeing me prone. thanks M |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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The Crimson Knight Member
since 2002-09-16
Posts 57Reno, NV |
Very nice poem, every once and awhile I like to go out and have a few to soothe the day away, but I try to keep it so I can remember the way home. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Drinking and Exercising? Don't get pulled over! *s When you think you have heard it all, |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
hmmm, at first I thought you were already on your way home, but you hadn't arrived at the alehouse the flavor of the poem is very much in line with the intent, well done yep, don't get pulled over  Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
vandana ..thank you *s Sir Knight of Colour...not to worry..I am only 10 buildings uphill..impossible to get lost in this small town. . Chanson...just wish I liked to drink enough to not remember just once *s..and no one ever pulls me over  even when walkingVAS...nope I actually wrote the poem before I left *s and yes I only stayed long enough to ruffle some feathers thank you all for replying to my "nonsense" poem M |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I understand this alot. Hey, maybe I should try having one. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Nakdthoughts - yes, tis true... BC |
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Paddy Member
since 2002-09-23
Posts 52Straya |
Nice read, thanks. I wouldn't attempt to try and drown those thoughts, but then, I ain't gorgeous. I guess one becomes content with one’s poetry when one opens the book ten years hence and does NOT exclaim, “Did I really write this?” |
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