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The Depth of Change
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The Depth of Change |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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The Depth of Change The other night, you held me in full view, brushed lips to mine eyes opened, seeing the moment I was feeling. Instinct took over, fingertips guiding mine 'til we were oblivious to those around us, late Summer, lingering its touch. The colour in you rose, while mine settled into a calm pale, freeing me from the addiction of another, allowing me the lessons of love. There is a mystery that shall always be, challenging, shaping the days to come, bathing me in pieces of you, wondering if ever I can disable you with my charms. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssss) Oh Maureen, I just love how you express yourself, sweet friend, we all must accept the inevitable changes but also have faith it will always be for the better, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
..."freeing me from the addiction of another" Speaks volumes and volumes! Congratulations in finding a new love after the old love is gone! I'm happy for you! ~ smiles ~ Linda |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you all for your kind responses... *s M |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Maureen, there are some very very sweet lines in this. Full of natural emotion. Just the way i like to read you. This poem literally glows, M. Really liked this. Enjoy love and live life! jeff |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you go girl! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
There is a mystery that shall always be, challenging, shaping the days to come, bathing me in pieces of you, wondering if ever I can disable you with my charms. My dear lady what man indeed would be imune to your charms??? Very nicely done... and a perfect poem for this rainy day... |
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