Open Poetry #22 |
A reply to a Question |
Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Then I will allow age to settle upon me as does each season... slinky spring, sultry summer, free fall, warm winter... and age? Age shall be but a number that might be divided, or multiplied, depending on the circumstance and occasion... and I shall rely upon the viewer to discern my age today... by looking into his eyes |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Indeed! "Age is in the eye of the beholder." As I grow older it amazes me how little I know...and how little my kids think I know! |
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Magician Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 126 |
And in his eyes he sees nothing Nothing but a spirit, A spirit eternal My sentiments exactly...nice poem. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Looooooooook into my eyes ... you are getting veeeeeeerrrrrrrrry sleeeeeeeeeeepy ... Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Soleil Age changes every day...sweeping time under the rug or dusting it to shine, it wants to chase us. All we have to do is stop running. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Soleil Noir Wisdom is a cheshire cat, enjoyed. |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Time shall look back, and smile. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
A poem for all seasons. Bob |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
LOL@Interloper! I love this...a time and age for everything.. How come in my head I'm twenty something... perhaps...it's magic.... do you think?...perhaps. *I know I'm older when I hear voices and am not too sure from whence they come.* ~Giggles & Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"and I shall rely upon the viewer to discern my age today... by looking into his eyes" (smiles) Oh Soleil, this is soooooo beautiful, I love this! (giggles over Interloper's comment) Indeed the true alchemy of time exists within our hearts and what we believe in, for the child inside us all will always smile and if we hold it true we are forever young! There is a famous saying that goes "He Who Knows His Own Generation Will Forever Remain A Child"! (big hugggsssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Soleil, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-18-2002 02:36 PM).] |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
an age of wisdom in a jar of time - well wrought lady, this breathes (as they all do in this style), and it brings a smile of understanding and - dare i say it - anticipation... tres cool C |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Its amazing how a smile can make a face look 10 years younger in an instant... Very nice poem, Sol ~ hugs and grins Lyra |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Age shall be but a number that might be divided, or multiplied, depending on the circumstance and occasion... Some day's I feel 80, others 15. Still looking for that happy medium. Very cool poem! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Simply - I like it... K |
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