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If you are here...or not
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
The house is packed a life that never should’ve been now in boxes some things remain till last minute this desk this connection the heart that hangs to my left deep blue tassel it is yours you sent it to me along with key already found does it still fit by nature I wonder always not about the love that I believe as certainly as my fingertips upon you but still I wonder not knowing whom to blame or thank the gods have not spoken lately and I really miss their thoughts on this my love for you will carry on whatever morning brings if you are here or not I love you |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 Carry on. Love will find a way. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
the gods have not spoken lately Oh, Dunc...I hate when that happens...and? love does endure... okay...laugh if y'want...but I think of love as "flubber" (remember that old movie) that amazing substance that just increased its own energy every time it bounced off still yet another "obstacle"? oh...pssst...maybe the gods ARE talking love...sssh....get still, and listen? Love this. Hugs you...and btw...y'COULD have written that scrip...I would not have argued...sighs...  |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Yes, this is true. If you are here or not I love you .... It is truly words... I love your written its great... Hugess secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Wish I had time to do this justice...it's wonderful, as are you.  You can never win or lose |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Tracey...said it best. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
by nature I wonder always not about the love that I believe as certainly as my fingertips upon you but still I wonder not knowing whom to blame or thank =============================== Have I ever told you that are adorable when you are a moth Have missed reading your heart dear D. ya make me mothy heart smile  In the space between now and then |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Duncan - I'm not sure why this is, but I'm reading poems about my very thoughts this morning, of which this is one. This is a very good write of feelings... BC |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
My friend.... their is nothing I can say that conveys the thoughts in my head and the feeling inside when I read this. It touches me...that will have to suffice. |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Sometimes, as our Cap'n says... we just have to let you know that you touched us... and nothing else needs be said. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh Duncan, my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, love will find a way and I know you will find it soon as you are so deserving of true happiness! (big hugggssssss) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Duncan Me too, with the touch thing.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dunc, You left a firefly in the night, enjoyed. |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Duncan....just a note to echo all the comments above. Excellent. Bob |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
If you are here or not I love you... This touches me deeply, Duncan... It reminds me of the time, right after my first husband died, when I had to sort through all of his stuff... and sometimes it felt like he was still here right next to me and telling me what to do with it... and other times, I just couldn't find him anywhere... ~ teary hugsLyra |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Duncan- expressing love is one of your gifts.  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh my, you say it so nice Duncan~ and with such content and resolve. I hope your love will always be there for her, and for you. |
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Christopher
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
quote:sometimes we get it right, and you did here m'friend. i wrote something in this vein a while back... uhm, not very good though, lol. keep writin', keep pluggin', i'm a-followin' right behind. C |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm sorry |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
..."If you are here or not, I love you." I cannot help but think, that in some way or another, the converse may also be true. For how could she not still have love for you whether you are together or not---for he who is capable of writinge words such as these, is surely a beautiful, sensitive and caring soul worthy of love. Take Care Earth Angel |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
If you are here...or not I love you That says it all, so what can I say? I love this write?... doesn't seem to be enough, but for now, it will have to do. Tammy |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Too true too true. Well done D  K |
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