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Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2002-09-18 12:17 PM

“YOUR INNOCENCE”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
If I were blind,
I would
know the innocence
of your passion…

If I could see,
passion
would still be
your innocence…
~~~~

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

1 posted 2002-09-18 12:38 PM

wow, this set me to thinking! and romantic as you usually are, so it is great to enjoy and muse awhile
aloha, friend, cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Miah
Senior Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 1062
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2002-09-18 01:06 AM

That is very lovely Bill.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2002-09-18 06:26 AM

Bill,
I love your circular thought.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-09-18 08:20 AM

(sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I know what you mean, true beauty is always on the inside but the outside too with the smiles if we can see can also bring smiles! (big hugggssssss) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2002-09-18 11:43 AM

Bill

So interesting and romantically thoughtful poem.

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

6 posted 2002-09-18 01:07 PM

Innocence and passion...a rare combination. One to hold, should you find it.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

7 posted 2002-09-18 01:11 PM

Very nice Bill. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2002-09-18 06:39 PM

spendidly done, as always of your soft
style....thanx BC..

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2002-09-18 07:01 PM

very nice, Bill.
*s
M

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

10 posted 2002-09-18 08:02 PM

BC ~~ I just love your soft, gentle words. I like the way this reads.

Hugs, Marti

Every now and then take a good look at something not made
with hands -- a mountain, a star, the power of the ocean.
There will come to you wisdom,

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

11 posted 2002-09-18 08:10 PM

Bill...your gentle way of speaking pulls me in every time.
Beautiful.
~Gentle Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

12 posted 2002-09-18 09:07 PM

At one point we all experience that( passion and innocence), this poem captures it well.

[This message has been edited by walker (09-18-2002 09:08 PM).]

Kitty**
Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA

13 posted 2002-09-18 10:07 PM

Simple, Short and GREAT !!

Kitty

* That which gives light, must endure burning *

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