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02/08/02
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02/08/02 |
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CheekToCheek New Member
since 2002-09-17
Posts 4 |
Hey all!! im new around here~ anyways i wrote this for a girl i liked for awhile and 1 day we just clicked and everything went right that 1 day.. but than after that day she had to goto her cottage for a month.. and i thought id see her right when shed get back.. but she hasen't called me back to get together.. i don't think she wants to but she said she did.. im confused and don't know what to do as ive called quite a few times already...anyways sorry to bore u , here's the poem.. Augest second, two thousand two I remember like yesterday, the time of my life Holding you tight, your body and mine.. and kissing you The best day of my life is all thanks to you Taking sweet time saying our goodbyes Time went flying by Your leaving for awhile, too far away I missed and thought about you every single day Im patiently waiting for you to come back Im looking forward to seeing you Hoping things won't change from before All my fears came true, It seems like you just don't care anymore More nights of hugging my pillow, oh Replaying memories, I miss you so You don't know how bad this hurts It's been six weeks and just gets worse Im hoping that I can see you again Don't make my tears come falling down like rain Please don’t leave me without saying goodbye Please don’t leave me without saying goodbye Please don’t leave me without saying goodbye My heart can't get any worse I miss you so much "her name" Any comments, suggestions, or advice would be great... THX  |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
missing someone is hard to do. I hope you find what your looking for. i enjoyed your poem. and welcome!  |
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Miss T. Eyed Junior Member
since 2002-05-26
Posts 47 |
Welcome to Passions, I'm sure someone here will be able to help you out. I'm glad you were able to release some of your feelings through this poem. Hope things get better. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssss) Oh my gosh, this is such a beautifully tearjerking debut, sweet friend, I'm so sorry of your loss but know you are loved and if she doesn't return you will find that special somebody, I know it with all my heart, God Bless You! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions! Enjoyed your first post! I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome to Passions. Keep your cheeks ready, she still may come back. |
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CheekToCheek New Member
since 2002-09-17
Posts 4 |
thx everyone for the nice comments.. it means a lot ~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hope good things happen for you...James |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Brush with destiny for but a mere day..*sigh* I hope things will turn out well for you..lovely post..enjoyed..pulls me back a little back into nostalgia... Kristen If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
Welcome to Pip! Sorry to hear about your heartache. What doesn't kill us makes us stronger, and besides, there's always hope.. Tammy |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
and I add my hearty 'Welcome' here also. Your poem brought back feelings and memories, and understanding what I couldn't understand back then. You are in good company here, my friend, and keep writing... The music is playing..it's your turn to dance! |
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