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CheekToCheek
New Member

since 2002-09-17

Posts 4

0 posted 2002-09-18 12:05 PM

Hey all!! im new around here~
anyways i wrote this for a girl i liked for awhile and 1 day we just clicked and everything went right that 1 day.. but than after that day she had to goto her cottage for a month.. and i thought id see her right when shed get back.. but she hasen't called me back to get together.. i don't think she wants to but she said she did.. im confused and don't know what to do as ive called quite a few times already...anyways sorry to bore u , here's the poem..

Augest second, two thousand two
I remember like yesterday, the time of my life
Holding you tight, your body and mine.. and kissing you
The best day of my life is all thanks to you

Taking sweet time saying our goodbyes
Time went flying by
Your leaving for awhile, too far away
I missed and thought about you every single day

Im patiently waiting for you to come back
Im looking forward to seeing you
Hoping things won't change from before
All my fears came true, It seems like you just don't care anymore

More nights of hugging my pillow, oh
Replaying memories, I miss you so
You don't know how bad this hurts
It's been six weeks and just gets worse

Im hoping that I can see you again
Don't make my tears come falling down like rain
Please don’t leave me without saying goodbye
Please don’t leave me without saying goodbye
Please don’t leave me without saying goodbye
My heart can't get any worse

I miss you so much "her name"

Any comments, suggestions, or advice would be great... THX

Miah
Senior Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 1062
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2002-09-18 01:04 AM

missing someone is hard to do. I hope you find what your looking for. i enjoyed your poem. and welcome!

Miss T. Eyed
Junior Member

since 2002-05-26

Posts 47

2 posted 2002-09-18 03:12 AM

Welcome to Passions, I'm sure someone here will be able to help you out. I'm glad you were able to release some of your feelings through this poem. Hope things get better.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-09-18 06:36 AM

Welcome to Passions! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-09-18 08:15 AM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh my gosh, this is such a beautifully tearjerking debut, sweet friend, I'm so sorry of your loss but know you are loved and if she doesn't return you will find that special somebody, I know it with all my heart, God Bless You! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-09-18 09:06 AM

Welcome to Passions!
Enjoyed your first post!
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2002-09-18 11:07 AM

Welcome to Passions. Keep your cheeks ready, she still may come back.

CheekToCheek
New Member

since 2002-09-17

Posts 4

7 posted 2002-09-18 05:17 PM

thx everyone for the nice comments.. it means a lot ~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2002-09-19 02:25 AM

Hope good things happen for you...James

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

9 posted 2002-09-19 12:17 PM

Brush with destiny for but a mere day..*sigh* I hope things will turn out well for you..lovely post..enjoyed..pulls me back a little back into nostalgia...

Kristen

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Tammy Blessing
Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 366
PA

10 posted 2002-09-19 12:48 PM

Welcome to Pip! Sorry to hear about your heartache. What doesn't kill us makes us stronger, and besides, there's always hope..
Tammy

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

11 posted 2002-09-20 11:59 AM

and I add my hearty 'Welcome' here also. Your poem brought back feelings and memories, and understanding what I couldn't understand back then. You are in good company here, my friend, and keep writing...
The music is playing..it's your turn to dance!

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