Open Poetry #22 |
Burdens |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Burdens Take not my burdens upon you. I got myself into this mess and I'll get myself out of it too. We all have our share of burdens to work through. So don't even think about taking any of my burdens upon you. JamesLee Sept17 2002 |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Yes, when it comes to burdens it is up to ourselves to conquer them but the most our friends can do is to support with kindness and respect, and that alone is also special to have in these moments! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful wisdom, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I tend to think that relieving someone is a relief in itself...for all concerned. Our crosses are our own to bare~~ Nice write James~ |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Aloha, my friend...howzit? nicely expressed if not kinda scary/sad...I hope all is well with you bruddah James hugs, Cher Poetry is: |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Noah, Blues Serenade and Cher for the nice response...I'm making good progress...James |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Yes JM, I agree with you here...inevitably we remain responsible for our own burdens, although it is still nice to know that we have friends who would try to help us carry the burdens. Great one! The music is playing..it's your turn to dance! |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Yes, Good thoughts here. I love this poem. Awesome write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
well said, my friend James... Regards, Sudhir |
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