Open Poetry #22 |
I Kneel.... |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I kneel before my lord, my king in worship of this realm I know. I'll shed a tear as lashes sting from each lash shredding of the blow. I took to heart that which I shant. I took to hand warm feel of skin. I leave behind one love I can’t as now I tell my thousand sins. My heart I gave to her, our queen upon the day of christening. My soul didst leave in sight unseen of eyes most bright and glistening. Take now my flesh to lie the rack and twist the hemp till cries then still Tend not deep wounds of bleeding back as now hot pain doth come at will. And though my earth shall soon become a place of rest for this my soul. My heart wilt beat in lover’s strum till one last breath does slowly roll. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Wow, this poem reminded me of the band Creed's new hit "One Last Breath" reading it, yes, the Lord has a plan for all of us I surely believe and only He will lead you to all the answers of your desires! (big hugggsssssss) This is powerful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-17-2002 11:09 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Barry!! The images this conjures up in my mind! This just aches! Wonderful write! ..and now to sleep, perchance to dream. ~Nite hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling man yet again from within your pen a glittering precious gem appears. Each verse bathes the readers mind in the sorrowful picture, each syllable flows with wonder into the next. The flow is a dream, and the content is as always utterly beautiful. YOU know I adore this, the construction is perfect darling heart. You are, as always are a master of these knightly tales and I applaud your skill. I laud your ability to write so truthfully so picturesquely, but most of all I stand in awe by the way you write sooooooooo beautifully and manage to compress such wonder into so few words. Truly awesome writing and I love it utterly utterly utterly love it. I love it when you write like this, you really do excel. Love and warm stuff as always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Barry~ Sir, you really are amazing....I love when you write in this style...its all yours....HUGSSs Lauren~ I need some distraction |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Barry...Beautiful words...Paul Our lord is an all forgiving lord and will forgive all sins when we kneel before him. |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
very painfully deep and so well written..yes a 'golden glitter pen" as Marsha said.what wonderful things flow from your heart thru it... God blees you much, Cher Poetry is: |
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