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brian sites
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since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
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0 posted 2002-09-17 02:48 PM

to this
my plea
I want it to fall
with the circle of simplicity
Do Not Respond
leave it dead
then!
I know it was read
and understood
If you thank me
you will mock
and misunderstand
just read it please
no flotation
pleas
drop this down the
well
ploink!

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Member Rara Avis

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1 posted 2002-09-17 03:02 PM

Brian,
Here is a poem that destroys itself
by its own celebration.
God I love yr work.

Mike
(destroyer)

the_loner_23
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2 posted 2002-09-17 03:04 PM

Awesome work

Cold hands means a warm heart

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3 posted 2002-09-17 03:24 PM

I couldn't help it. Response to you is some sort involuntary biological urge with me!

Love this bri...

Magician
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4 posted 2002-09-17 03:28 PM

i thought you said do NOT respond..lol

great reading...

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5 posted 2002-09-17 03:32 PM

Sorry, but got to float this to the top.

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Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

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just out of reach

6 posted 2002-09-17 03:45 PM

Okay..I won't respond with how much I enjoyed this....ooops....sorry.

Chris

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BrightStar
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since 2001-04-08

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7 posted 2002-09-17 04:52 PM

My reply is that this is great

Admiring you poets at Passions.

misery_made_beautiful
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since 2002-08-10

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8 posted 2002-09-17 10:18 PM

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Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

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9 posted 2002-09-17 10:21 PM

brian - I didn't read it or respond, but it was good...

BC

misery_made_beautiful
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10 posted 2002-09-17 10:38 PM

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brian sites
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11 posted 2002-09-18 12:21 PM

darn it!

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