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Madame Chipmunk
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0 posted 2002-09-17 07:59 PM



~A Chipmunk's Dilemma~

     


She remains so willing
and yet unable
to grab those nuts
scattered neath the table

she used to cast whimsey
at the wind
and scamper through life
but now she's pinned

she once scurried to find acorns
to unwrap
but now she finds
her furry paws trapped

but her chattering mind
won't stay still
she has poems to write
and cheek pouches to fill

she hates to beg
but here's her dilemma
she needs her freedom
but please make it tender

don't grasp her too tight
there is pain in her paw
or frustration
will scratch with manicured claw
~





Lyra

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[This message has been edited by Madame Chipmunk (09-17-2002 08:52 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-09-17 08:02 PM


Hugs to ya girl.  You know that I would never
mistreat a chipmunk as precious as you are
to us...   Keep that paw still, elevated
and listen to your in house doctor...Super
Dave.....

Love the poem,  very cute...  Get well soon.

NewEnglandlazurlu
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2 posted 2002-09-17 08:03 PM


Sending a gentle hug for a lady who was missed by many.

I am so happy to see you back here on these blue pages.

Hugs and loves, Marti

Every now and then take a good look at something not made
with hands -- a mountain, a star, the power of the ocean.
There will come to you wisdom,

Bill Charles
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3 posted 2002-09-17 08:04 PM


Madame - see, I said in my reply to you that the little chipmunk was going to eat all of those nuts from the trees, crunch, crunch, hehehe...

BC

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4 posted 2002-09-17 08:04 PM


Lyra

She is not unable...her mind is like a jump from tree to tree, her fur soft as love, and her sense of self, sharp with wit and humor.  Hugs to you for this delight in the face of adversity...and for being so strong.

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5 posted 2002-09-17 08:10 PM


Lyra~ It sounds like you are feeling your acorns. LOL Enjoyed...Paul
Miah
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6 posted 2002-09-17 08:15 PM


Dearest Madame Chipmunk,  


I read about your leg surgery.  You have a lot of courage, you seem very loved here and you shine like the stars.  I wish you health and happiness.  I just loved your poem.  Warm wishes to you.

  

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7 posted 2002-09-17 08:21 PM


ChipperMunk~
We love you ... your strength ... your fragilty at times like this ... and we're behind you thousands of prayers strong !

You take care of your precious little 'munker' self~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

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8 posted 2002-09-17 08:23 PM



You ARE beginning to feel better...
I could feel the smiles around the room!

Madame Chipmunk
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9 posted 2002-09-17 08:28 PM


Thanks so much, Barry...  Its hard to scamper with the paw elevated though
~ lots of chipmunk hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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10 posted 2002-09-17 08:32 PM


Thanks so much, Marti...
Soon I'll be back to eat all the tasty flowers you planted...
so... watch out.
~ hugs from a scurrying garden pest

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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11 posted 2002-09-17 08:36 PM


Thanks Bill...  I guess you must have harvested the nuts and scattered them under the table...  I sure wish I could get out of this trap though, because they sure are tempting.
~ hugs from a soon to be free again chipmunk

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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12 posted 2002-09-17 08:38 PM


Thanks so much for all of your caring, Martie and for that lovely reply.
~ hugs and scurries

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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13 posted 2002-09-17 08:40 PM


Thanks so much, Paul...
My cheekpouches are bulging with them now.
~ hugs of recovery

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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14 posted 2002-09-17 08:41 PM


Thanks so much, Miah...
Welcome to Piptalk...  I look forward to reading some of your work.
~ welcoming hugs from the resident chipmunk

Lyra

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15 posted 2002-09-17 08:42 PM


Hmmm.... missed something here me thinks, but seem to have surmised much...
great write and I've a bunch of really fresh nuts been saving... now I know who for...

Hang in there...

jwesley

Madame Chipmunk
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16 posted 2002-09-17 08:44 PM


Thanks so much for all of those prayers, Marge...
That is where my courage and strength come from.
But I do feel very vulnerable right now, just like that chipmunk trapped in the jar.
Soon, I hope to be scampering around again with cheekpouches full of poetry
~ scampery hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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17 posted 2002-09-17 08:48 PM


Thanks so much, Karilea...
Yes... I am dancing with my crutches...
Actually, I walked around with just a cane for a bit this afternoon... but my muscles are feeling the strain.  Of course, I was told that the more I used those muscles, the faster I would heal... So I am still dancing...or at least, trying to.
~ dancing hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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18 posted 2002-09-17 08:50 PM


Thanks so much jwesley....
Winter is coming and chipmunks all over the world are looking for nuts with which to fill their cheek pouches...
So thank you for saving me some...
I totally appreciate it.
~ lots of chipmunk hugs

Lyra

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19 posted 2002-09-17 09:33 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Lyra, we all continue to offer our prayers and love to you as you heal then again you will frolic about like the mischievious cute chipmunk you are to us all! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, you truly are a treasure to us all, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lyra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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20 posted 2002-09-17 09:33 PM


Awww...what a cute little chipmunk.   Be careful on those crutches, Lyra.  We all want that paw to heal quickly. *hugs* and God bless you!
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21 posted 2002-09-17 09:36 PM


Ah yes - manicured claws are the way to go... Every chipmunk worth her whimsey owes it to herself, don'tcha think???

Hugs, dear Lyra..

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22 posted 2002-09-17 09:48 PM


Oh, dear Chippymunk, take heart & know that the healing process can make the most patient of us want to throw a tantrum. I love the pic with this delightful poem. hugs to you!! Chris  

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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Madame Chipmunk
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23 posted 2002-09-17 11:12 PM


Thanks so much, Noah...
I especially appreciate the prayers because I know that they work...
Now I just need to get out of this jam
~ loving chipmunk hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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24 posted 2002-09-17 11:17 PM


Thanks so much, Micheal...
The paw is healing and I can now put some weight on it... but it will take quite a while before it is completely like new...
I was told that after radiation, it would feel completely better... but radiation doesn't start until Oct. 7.
Thanks for your prayers
~ dancing hugs

Lyra

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25 posted 2002-09-17 11:17 PM


I love this. So much feelings expressed

Cold hands means a warm heart

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26 posted 2002-09-17 11:19 PM


Oh Lyra, my dear sweet friend, you take care of yourself. Take it slow and easy. Love Ya!
Madame Chipmunk
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27 posted 2002-09-17 11:20 PM


Thanks Nan,  This chipmunk always tries to keep them manicured, but now that I'm hobbling on crutches, they don't look as good as they're s'posed to... but I'll make sure to get em done before the poet meet...
They'll still scratch real good tho...
~ loving chipmunk hugs

Lyra

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28 posted 2002-09-17 11:22 PM


love ya little chippy girl....very sweet poem, is the little chipmunk a pet? around the homestead??  you are amazing in your strength.....very inspirational...
Lauren~   HUGSSS you

I need some distraction
...oh beautiful release
Memories seep from my veins

Madame Chipmunk
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29 posted 2002-09-17 11:22 PM


Thanks so much, Chris...
and this is one frustrated mean chipmunk right now...
I'm stuck in that jar and can't get those nuts on the floor.....
~ frustrated chipmunk hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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30 posted 2002-09-17 11:24 PM


Thanks so much, Julie...
Oh the frustration of not being able to scamper...  Its driving me NUTS!!!!
~ scampery hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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31 posted 2002-09-17 11:26 PM


Thanks so much, Sue...
I have to take it slow and easy...because I sure can't move fast right now...
but at least I can move... and I can put weight on that leg again...so things are looking up.
Soon I'll be dancing with those crutches
~ dancing hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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32 posted 2002-09-17 11:28 PM


Thanks so much, Lauren... actually thats a picture I got off webshots and it just expresses how I feel because that little rodent is stuck in a jam jar and can't move her paws to get out of it...
she's probably in worse shape than I am.
~ hugs in a jar

Lyra

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