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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-09-16 07:13 PM


(Me and Vandana wrote this together and had fun writing it, hope you enjoy! Yay! )

It Takes Time
By: Vandana and Noah Eaton
9/16/02

All the times you and i were friends now we drift apart
Standing here beside the bus depot in the rain
Hopping aboard a Greyhound to get you out of myself
but it takes time to heal the pain

when they aren't going well
how can I say when they ever do?
now when time is here
I have half a mind to be where I used to be too

Placed my bets and reasons on a roulette rack
for us to understand why we drift apart
now here i am thinking back at the times
we shouldn't get apart

Seems it could have been much easier in the first place
but now we know it takes time too
And the times are changing fast without a trace...
And I'm thinking about the past too, adieu...

Whenever i see your face in my dreams
i think i should take time and patience
just cash in these chips, so I can deal another hand
Under this marquee my heart is bleeding this instant

I've made up my mind
Tomorrow I'm leaving for good
Tomorrow is coming too soon
It takes time
But I dare not think about this time
I don't think I ever could...


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-16-2002 07:13 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-09-16 07:57 PM


Hey you two!!!  

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YEP IT IS,  VERY NICELY DONE....GREAT JOB..

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2 posted 2002-09-16 08:30 PM


Noah and Vananda,

This poem is very good, good job. Thank yo for sharing and we all love you two.

Love,
Andrea Kruckenberg

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3 posted 2002-09-16 08:38 PM


Vandana and Noah - there you go, writing a very lovely and touching duet...

BC

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4 posted 2002-09-16 08:51 PM


Vandana and Noah~Wonderful touching duet!
~Hugs to you both~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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5 posted 2002-09-16 11:52 PM


Awesome

Cold hands means a warm heart

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6 posted 2002-09-17 06:39 AM


well done duet you two!!  Thank you both for sharing.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

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7 posted 2002-09-17 08:26 AM


Noah & Vandana---Bravissimo! Well done!
                 You did it!

~ smiling through my tears ~
Linda

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8 posted 2002-09-17 09:42 AM


Bravo you two!! Well done. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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9 posted 2002-09-17 07:30 PM


hey noah!!!!yay!!!!!!!we did it!!!!!!we should write it once again!!!!!!thank you for writing with me and thankas a lot!!!!!!!!!thank you for sharing this!!!!!!!
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10 posted 2002-09-17 10:42 PM


Like this...James
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11 posted 2002-09-17 11:28 PM


Awwww hey you two....such a treat this is to read....BRAVO and please do more.....


hugsssss
Lauren~

I need some distraction
...oh beautiful release
Memories seep from my veins

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