Open Poetry #22 |
It Takes Time (Duet With Vandana) |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(Me and Vandana wrote this together and had fun writing it, hope you enjoy! Yay! ) It Takes Time By: Vandana and Noah Eaton 9/16/02 All the times you and i were friends now we drift apart Standing here beside the bus depot in the rain Hopping aboard a Greyhound to get you out of myself but it takes time to heal the pain when they aren't going well how can I say when they ever do? now when time is here I have half a mind to be where I used to be too Placed my bets and reasons on a roulette rack for us to understand why we drift apart now here i am thinking back at the times we shouldn't get apart Seems it could have been much easier in the first place but now we know it takes time too And the times are changing fast without a trace... And I'm thinking about the past too, adieu... Whenever i see your face in my dreams i think i should take time and patience just cash in these chips, so I can deal another hand Under this marquee my heart is bleeding this instant I've made up my mind Tomorrow I'm leaving for good Tomorrow is coming too soon It takes time But I dare not think about this time I don't think I ever could... "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-16-2002 07:13 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Hey you two!!! S P L E N D I F O R O U S ! YEP IT IS, VERY NICELY DONE....GREAT JOB.. |
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TradingSpaces19 Member
since 2002-08-31
Posts 134Arvada, Colorado |
Noah and Vananda, This poem is very good, good job. Thank yo for sharing and we all love you two. Love, Andrea Kruckenberg |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Vandana and Noah - there you go, writing a very lovely and touching duet... BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Vandana and Noah~Wonderful touching duet! ~Hugs to you both~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
well done duet you two!! Thank you both for sharing. If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah & Vandana---Bravissimo! Well done! You did it! ~ smiling through my tears ~ Linda |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Bravo you two!! Well done. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
hey noah!!!!yay!!!!!!!we did it!!!!!!we should write it once again!!!!!!thank you for writing with me and thankas a lot!!!!!!!!!thank you for sharing this!!!!!!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this...James |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Awwww hey you two....such a treat this is to read....BRAVO and please do more..... hugsssss Lauren~ I need some distraction |
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