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the_loner_23
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0 posted 2002-09-17 03:25 PM


One minute he is here
One minute he is gone

One minute I got a claw in my butt
One minute it has disappeared

He meows at me
Then he shuts up

He looks at me with one eye open
Then I see him no more

Disappearing kitty

Cold hands means a warm heart

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ThunderMage
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1 posted 2002-09-17 03:26 PM


That's one sneaky ninja cat.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

Auguste
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2 posted 2002-09-17 03:30 PM


LOL!  Sounds just like my cat.
Sunshine
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3 posted 2002-09-17 03:32 PM



sean_krazy
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since 2002-09-14
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4 posted 2002-09-17 04:16 PM


lol...just like all the cats huh?

thanks for ur reply on my poem..
it means a lot to me

sean

BlueEyes
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since 2002-08-30
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5 posted 2002-09-17 04:23 PM


LOL!!!  Very funny... especially liked the "claw in my butt" line... made me smile

BlueEyes

smitty-j
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6 posted 2002-09-17 04:57 PM


Too funny ;o)
NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04
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A Mountain Paradise
7 posted 2002-09-17 05:01 PM


That is one sneaky kitty kat!

Hugs, Marti

Every now and then take a good look at something not made
with hands -- a mountain, a star, the power of the ocean.
There will come to you wisdom,

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
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Texas, USA
8 posted 2002-09-17 05:55 PM


He's smart and he's a cat, what more do you need to know?

Nan(Pilgrim variety)

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05
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9 posted 2002-09-17 07:14 PM


He sounds like a typical cat to me, Julie...
~ kitty cat hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
10 posted 2002-09-17 08:30 PM


the_loner_23 - they sure can be independent, those kitties them....

BC

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