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Open Poetry #22

Missing In Action

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2002-09-17 12:12 PM

I am missing
your interaction,
your action,
your inaction.
I am missing
You.
The yew
still grows
by my slopes
of thought.
The dew
of you
rests lightly
upon my
restless branches;
the clouds above
withhold
their healing gift
and yet...
there is moisture
under these eyes
that miss
your action,
your inaction,
your interaction.
I am missing
You.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (09-17-2002 02:55 PM).]

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2002-09-17 12:13 PM

Now, that's the lovely write I have missed from you for so long.

I love it!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2002-09-17 12:20 PM

This was beautifully written---BEAUYIFULLY written. Your technique was also impeccable---I like the full circle aspect of this as well

See you soon on the blue pages!
Linda

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2002-09-17 12:26 PM

Active hugs to you, my dearest loper.

Linda, how kind,

you are too generous in that comment!

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

4 posted 2002-09-17 01:32 PM

If ya wanna be my ghost writer, you're gonna have to get a better editor...lol.
Yep, pretty much sums it up. Do 'normal' people feels this way? Oh well, normal was never really a big goal of mine.
Good one, Kacy.

smitty-j
Member

since 2002-09-13

Posts 72
Florida, USA

5 posted 2002-09-17 01:35 PM

I love it..I'll have to keep an eye out now (^_~)
J

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2002-09-17 02:56 PM

Thanks for finding my resltess typo, Duncan.

smitty,

thanks for reading and the eye reply.

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