Open Poetry #22 |
Intrigue |
Magician Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 126 |
Intrigue leads to enchantment Weaving little threads of magic Some would call entrapment Some would call tragic Not I, the one spellbound Held transfixed forever Yet there is no sound As threads begin to sever And left to my new reality Like living a waking dream Or was it just fantasy To behold my timeless Queen ‘Then’ and ‘There’ are words Which are given to intrigue Something never heard In my fairy tale fatigue I was a non-believer Before she did so enchant Which no daydream deceiver Could ever supplant |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Magical words. A lovely write. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A weaver of magic... this, Sir, will be much appreciated... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This write Magician...is oh so very full of intrigue..and enchantment. It held me spellbound...wanting more...not wanting the threads to be severed. A beautifully inspired write on this sultry summer afternoon... You poet sir have penned a Into my secret library it goes... ..for yet another read...then....there. ~Smiles & Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is just wonderful, sweet friend, and may this magic light your heart more than any other charm thought possible! (big hugggsssss) You are a true wizard of words, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Magician, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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smitty-j Member
since 2002-09-13
Posts 72Florida, USA |
wonderful, entrancing words...I love it phew..outta the fog now Julie...reality awaits(^_~) J |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This was indeed enjoyed by this Enchantress! Would love to see more of your magical talents. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Encore! ThisDiamond |
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Magician Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 126 |
Thank you Smitty-j for finding this way underneath all the real good poetry here. |
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smitty-j Member
since 2002-09-13
Posts 72Florida, USA |
My pleasure....most certainly J |
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Magician Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 126 |
Its almost as if I know you somehow...thank you. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh, I like this one. The music in your words resounds in my mind. Nan(Pilgrim variety) |
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Magician Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 126 |
Thank you Nan. |
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