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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Treading I tread a path that billions tread Some alive but most are dead Lit by lanterns fueled by why Washed by tears of billions cry. To this I add, one candle more To light the way to questions door A candlelight that bears my sigh This insignificant singles try I serve it to eternity On a platter of fraternity Burn my tallow as all the rest And try my very, very best. I, as others would find the light That light that weds forever’s night That bright that spreads when we are bed Into eternals freedom led Each candle lights a small hello The only truth I really know. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
We could light the night with all the tendered truth you know ... your wisdom's wile sparks the moon and stars in silvered glow. The sequestered sun rises and sets in sequential successions ... fueled by curiosities desire burning in seek of unanswered questions. Never stop searching the wonderment of what, when or why ... all answers will be found in these pages bound by the words of Sy. ~~  ~~*winkiewinkie*    |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Seymour, every sentiment you post here is like a new candle being lit, sweet friend, I know all of these questions will be answered as you approach them gently in time! (big huggssssss) Wonderfrul, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thnak you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
My Tinkerbell is up early this morning. Are you dubble checking all your things? Randy said he'll fly you no charge if you don't mind the weather. WWRS |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Our answer is built in with living. I'm only asking about peripherals. LOL thank you. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T.---You're simply as wonderful as your words! Janet Marie's response was incredible!---and oh, so true. I'd be honored to echo her reply to you. ~ good morning!!! ~ EA |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I tread a path that billions tread Some alive but most are dead Lit by lanterns fueled by why Washed by tears of billions cry. Ya know, this is truly classic Sey........and oh how good it is!! Well done sir........well done indeed! Morning hugs to you. If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sy, I have to echo JM's reply to you. A beautiful morning read this sunny day. ~Morning Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel, You hold your own, but echoing JM is flattering. Thank you Gentle Spirit, Thank you for the well done and hugs back. Enchantress, Always emjoy a hug from you. Have a good one. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour - thanks for this morning's wonderful write. Awesome. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Very nicely done Sy... you again share the wisdom you hold in such a gentle way we can not help but listen. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Thank you dear for the read and reply. Cpat Hair Thank you for the well done. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling heart, late yet again, although I’ve been popping in and out today a lot, sent here to gather the dew of delight you leave in these pages blue. Krissy wants to read some of her favourite poets on the plane and so I’ve been gathering gems for her. There is a little batch from you, and a few select others for her to read and then let her mind roam at will over a landscape of poetic beauty. A candle’s flame flies your soul’s why Over the mountains up to the sky There in the clouds the angels sigh Collecting poems written by Sy Each poet’s word an angel’s breathes The soft words falling like autumn’s leaves To each question they say the same The answer’s held in this poet’s name A gift from you of words so wise Then wrapped in wonder and served in sighs The flickering of your soul’s clear light Takes it far into the dark of night I would listen to their refrain To learn the meaning held in your name This is exquisite writing and I love it utterly utterly utterly love it Not long now ........ getting closer As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
JM definitely got it right, Sy... I think she speaks for me too... A simply stunning write  ~ appreciative chipmunk hugsLyra |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
enjoyed this mucho, me friend...as usually I do when reading yours jwesley |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Each candle lights a small hello... I didn't miss this... I was just late... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, You are always a delight to read anytime you answer.Give my best to krissy and tell her it would be a delight to have her read anything of mime at the meetig. Love you all Sy Lyra, I hope you are well and glad to see you posting again. jwesley Thank you mucho for the read and like. Sunshine, Yuo ae a doll. |
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