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fishop
Member

since 2002-09-13

Posts 79
ohio

0 posted 2002-09-16 10:41 PM

What do You see?

When you see ten thousand sparkles on an ordinary stone.

Or rings expanding on a pond,from where the stone was thrown.

When you see a ray of sunshine slanting downward through the clouds.

Or the uncertain face of a child, change suddenly to proud.

When you gaze upward in wonder at the mystery of space.

When you look beyond the chaos and you find a quiet place.

You dwell upon all things like these with genuine affection.

Because, what you're looking at my friend,

is your own reflection!

Tom Bishop

WhileIWasGone
Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 486

1 posted 2002-09-16 10:58 PM

Great work...enjoyed very much.

DeaDiAmore

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-09-16 11:17 PM

Awesome work

Cold hands means a warm heart

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2002-09-17 09:28 AM

These wonderful words are a "reflection" of the man that you are!

~ smiles ~
EA

smitty-j
Member

since 2002-09-13

Posts 72
Florida, USA

4 posted 2002-09-17 12:16 PM

Hi Tom,
Once again nice job...I'm wondering if the almost heart shape was on purpose..nahhh...guess not (^_~)
I think us both being new, I've kinda latched on to ya..haha....well that plus I think we have somewhat similar styles, whatever that means, you may not see it, but I have others that have the same tone as yours. Good job and good luck to ya.
Julie
P.S. I posted one to critical analysis...arrrrgh...take a peek if you get a sec, didn't get quite the kind of help I was hoping for there.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2002-09-17 12:29 PM

Wow, that is so totally cool. Into my library, for reflection.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2002-09-17 12:40 PM

I love my reflection and your work is excellent

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

fishop
Member

since 2002-09-13

Posts 79
ohio

7 posted 2002-09-19 11:52 PM

Thank you all for the encouragment.

I check out your poem Julie. Hope I didn't over step with the help I tried to give. Watching for more from you.

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