Open Poetry #22 |
Be A Part Of My Dream |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Come and lay down here beside me And be a part of my wonderful dream I'll take you to so many places With so much love you've ever seen We'll travel the far horizons And plunge into the deepest sea Upon the waves of our desire Our spirits will be set free We'll climb the peaks of passion To reach the summit of our love Then we'll lay amongst the wildflowers And watch the birds soar high above I'll kiss you beneath the moonlight To the sound of our heart's tune Letting love take us even higher As we're transported to the moon I am in motion |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I like the passion in this one, Sue, and it's so good to see you. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sue, you always write with such passion for words and this is no exception. Write on Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
A 'red hot' poem my friend. If you get to the moon, please pick me up a small rock and send a postcard. Oh, and you might want to stake out a garden spot. :-) Great passion in these words; I liked it so much. Hugs, Marti |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Sue, this is beautiful, sweet friend, your words of romance always make me smile, may your love always fill your dreams and rest in their eternal blankets! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SueTang~ Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Put the rockets in place and fly.... Nicely done Sue T. |
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