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ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2002-09-16 05:48 PM

     Welling,
          behind open eyes
             waiting to release

   Swelling,
        riding coming tides
           for its thoughts to cease

               Burning,
                    with each gasp for air
                       to soothe sudden fire

        Yearning,
             a moment to share
                this, a tear's desire

create an addiction .... share a smile!!

[This message has been edited by ctowen (09-16-2002 05:49 PM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-09-16 05:51 PM

Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-09-16 06:08 PM

(big hugggsssss) Oh Craig, I understand these desires ever so well too, sweet friend, I wish for them all to come true for you and bring great comfort to your heart! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2002-09-16 06:10 PM

Excellent Craig, you surely have not lost
your touch....Good to see you here within
the blue walls again....

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

4 posted 2002-09-16 07:12 PM

Well done

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

WhileIWasGone
Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 486

5 posted 2002-09-16 08:00 PM

Beautiful...enjoyed much.

DeaDiAmore

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2002-09-16 08:05 PM

ctowen - Enjoyed this "tearful" piece very much. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

7 posted 2002-09-16 10:28 PM

sharing.....BIG HUGSSSSS

ME~

I need some distraction
...oh beautiful release
Memories seep from my veins

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2002-09-16 10:53 PM

The last stanza says so much...
love is an emotion that weeps and leaves so much to be desired~~ works both ways I guess. I liked the way you balanced the swell and 'wrote' it out.

You're always a good read and a fine writer Craig~

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

9 posted 2002-09-17 09:16 AM

This was so well done---and the presentation of your thoughts on the page was very effective---drawing the reader in---and down.

~ smiles across the miles ~
Earth Angel

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

10 posted 2002-09-17 09:43 AM

desires can often do that...
loved the presentation Craig.
~smiling
M

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