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Open Poetry #22

20 or Less - The Man

Sybil
Member

since 2002-09-12

Posts 73
Midwest

0 posted 2002-09-16 04:42 PM

20 or Less – The Man

He came
     He believed
           He dreamed
                 He believed.

     All happened.

[This message has been edited by Sybil (09-16-2002 04:43 PM).]

arthur
Senior Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

1 posted 2002-09-16 04:58 PM

you must have a dream to make it happen
arthur

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-09-16 05:05 PM

Very cool poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2002-09-16 05:05 PM

Very insightful Sybil....

He believed and came to see...
From the dream which arose.
He thought and knew would be
all of these as well as those.

And it was...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-09-16 06:20 PM

(smiles) Yay!!! Oh Sybil, this is such a beautiful blessing, sweet friend, I believe to love oneself and follow ones dreams and heart will get everyone far and bring great comfort for dear life! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is touching, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sybil, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-09-16 07:45 PM

Extremely well done Sybil!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

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