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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-09-15 10:52 PM


(For My Dear Sweet Loving Handsome Liam )

Everynight I go to sleep
And happy dreams I do have
I wake up smiling every morning
Picturing him in my head

He is so sweet
He signs on to MSN
To tell me when he won't be on later
He knows he doesn't have to do this
But he does it anyways

He is happy when I am happy
But if something makes me down
It makes Liam put on a frown
He hates it when I am mad
Or sad
But man oh man
Does he know how to cheer a girl up

He sends me cute little e-cards
To show me how he feels
Because he has a hard time expressing
What he is feeling
But I am trying to help him
In this area a little bit

We have almost been together a year
Actually it will be a year
September 26th
And not a day goes by
That I don't fall in love with him more.

Cold hands means a warm heart

© Copyright 2002 the_loner_23 - All Rights Reserved
Miah
Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062
Pennsylvania
1 posted 2002-09-15 10:59 PM


How lovely this is for your sweetheart. I bet it will make his heart go thump thump,   What a lucky guy.  I enjoyed your poem.
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2002-09-15 11:36 PM


So are you still a loner...sounds like good things are happening...James
~ViXeN~
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since 2000-01-09
Posts 93
Guelph, Ont. Canada
3 posted 2002-09-15 11:53 PM


Reading this made me think of that someone special in my life as well...
Its always nice when they are considerate...
Very real! I enjoyed it lots!

Mistletoe Angel
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since 2000-12-17
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Portland, Oregon
4 posted 2002-09-16 12:01 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Julie, I understand these feelings ever so much, for almost a year I have loved Joanna and I cry because she is so lovely and I want her more than anyone in the whole wide world! (sigh) I wish you and Liam the best, sweet friend, God Bless You Both, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ThunderMage
Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
5 posted 2002-09-16 11:13 PM


I love you too Julie.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167
state of confusion
6 posted 2002-09-16 11:27 PM


How sweet! Congratulations, too!

Cor

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