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PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

0 posted 2002-09-15 10:33 PM

"Finally Feel Complete"

16 hours straight of sleep
and no imagening of you;
you fail to colorfie
the dreary world of my dreamless sleep.
Oh why? Oh why?
Because then I'd be complete.
For I carry you within my heart
every hour, every day.
I put my arms around you
yet all I feel is air.

What you are is beautiful
and what you are is all to me.
Oh won't you rest here in my arms
and let our hearts beat as one, and us
to finally feel complete?

Something's missing when you're gone,
my heart is beating such a restless tune.
My companion who will listen to all
my senseless jargon and make me feel complete.
The future falls before our feet, giving
us pause wile revving us to sped.
Want to run away with you.
Won't you run away,
leaving the world with an upside
down little bird.

What you are is beautiful
and what you are is all to me.
Oh won't you rest here in my arms
and let our hearts beat as one, and us
to finally feel complete?

I reach for the dreams I have
when I'm awake.
Want to have you here with me,
filling the empty seat.
Give this world a big good-bye,
and drive off into the heat,
and finally feel complete.
Oh why, oh why
why can't it just be you and I?

What you are is beautiful
and what you are is all to me.
Oh won't you rest here in my arms
and let our hearts beat as one, and us
to finally feel complete....
Won't you rest...
Won't we finally feel complete...

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-09-15 10:41 PM

This is beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Miah
Senior Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 1062
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2002-09-15 11:06 PM

PoetryIsLife,

The little pang I feel when I read this goes straight to my heart. Longing is so hard sometimes. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem.

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

3 posted 2002-09-16 12:01 PM

Someday we will all be sitting in Starbucks talking about the past. On your finger will be a band to remind you that it was all worth it.

"you don't need one of these to let me inside of you" T.A.

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

4 posted 2002-09-16 02:07 AM

Titus

"I'll prepare myself, and one day my time will come."
-Abraham Lincoln

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-09-16 10:52 AM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Daniel, I know just how you feel, I understand this yearning so much as you know for my Joanna, but I know with a golden heart llike yours you are bound to have her and share a life of joy with her! (sigh) This is lovely and heartfelt, sweet friend, this would make a beautiful song, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Daniel, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2002-09-16 11:15 AM

PoetryIsLife
Sometimes redundancy helps, enjoyed.

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

7 posted 2002-09-16 07:18 PM

Titus

"I'll prepare myself, and one day my time will come."
-Abraham Lincoln

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