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John B Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 68Texas, USA 
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Eyechaser Every eye tries to chase What won’t be erased But one can’t grip What one won’t face What puts one in your place And if one can’t grip What one can’t trace That which is erased What will one have to face? |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi John! Very unique style... Interesting write... Enjoyed much by this reader. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
In trying to forget something, you first have to face it, headon. I'll think peaceful thoughts for you. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
My interpretation was of people who feed on pain and misery and prolong it by not facing it because they're afraid of having nothing left to face (as you said in the last line). Probably not at all what you had in mind, but that's just what I came up with. It's always interesting to see how many different ways poems can be taken. "you don't need one of these to let me inside of you" T.A. |
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