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the_loner_23
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0 posted 2002-09-15 09:02 PM


Your walking on an island
Exploring the land

You look at the many pods
Of dinosaurs around

The ground starts shaking
The other pods of dinosaurs
Start racing
For cover

Out of the forest
Comes a runnin'
Big ole' T-Rex
With jaws wide open

You start to run
But it feels your vibration
Next thing you know

CHOMP!!!
Now you are T-Rex meat
Now will your friend
Beat the T-Rex for cover

Before he knows it
He is safe inside a cave
With a T-Rex
Outside waiting for him to come out

Cold hands means a warm heart

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1 posted 2002-09-15 09:09 PM




(smiles) Hehehe, looks as though you have just watched The LOst World: Jurasic Park, methinks! I love the movies just as I love this wonderful poem of yours, sweet friend, now, RUN FOR IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-09-16 09:43 AM


Now this is the kinda stuff of which nightmares are made! Looks like I gonna have one tonight! Thanks all to hades, Julie!! hee-hee!

~ smiles ~
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3 posted 2002-09-16 12:36 PM


ROTFL. Julie, the expanded transportation system here in Denver is called T-Rex, and it will still be under construction for another year or so. It looks like giant dino footprints have stepped all over Denver.
Thanks for the grin.

brian madden
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ireland
4 posted 2002-09-16 01:42 PM


I always knew glam rock was dangerous, but I didn't know it could eat people. sorry a bad joke about the band T-rex. Ok I'll shut up now, enjoyed this one.

Too early for the rainbow, too early for the dove These are the final days, this is the darkness, this is the flood
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5 posted 2002-09-16 02:32 PM


Just a big lizard to dance upon my lance,
But for some valor is a hasty retreat, need a protector?
Well done

ThunderMage
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6 posted 2002-09-16 11:12 PM


Cool poem.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

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7 posted 2003-03-14 01:32 PM


T-Rex is almost as scary as semi trucks...
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